Mahfooz Ali

Rookie - 19 Points (28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

I love my family so much.


To be apart of a family like mine
is so divine
where love is shown
hurt is shared
our love for each other is never impaired

we talk
we laugh
we cry
but we are a family
and we do it all together
for as a family
we do it all as one

you hurt one
you hurt all
and as a family unit
we will all stand tall
for we are family
a family full of strength
a family full of love
a family no one can touch
that, s why I love my family so much.

Submitted: Monday, August 27, 2007
Edited: Friday, April 01, 2011

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  • Gold Star - 10,267 Points Kim Barney (2/26/2015 8:15:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem. Would be even better with two small changes. In line one, you didn't mean APART (one word): you really meant A PART (two words) .
    And in the last line, you should use THAT'S instead of THAT, S
    Keep on writing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kaila Pickett (11/27/2013 1:27:00 PM)

    it was beautiful it made me cry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Keawkunlaya Lohirunyanont (6/1/2008 9:47:00 AM)

    thank you for shareing yourself with all of us
    and I need borrow your poem in my blog.
    if you dont want please tell me at edennohanafuyu@gmail.com or
    click http: //mylittlechilds.blogspot.com
    I hope you will permit
    thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Myra Zack (2/15/2008 9:10:00 AM)

    It is a simple poem yet means a lot. if u're having a problem, its good to know that u still have ur family behind u. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hali Curtis (10/12/2007 4:41:00 PM)

    your lucky! ! I love my family to its just my cusin i dislike him alot but the rest are cool with me! lol thats great that u and ur family get along so great! Keep up the great poems!

    ~Hali C. (Report) Reply

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