I'M Responsible, I'M Sorry Poem by Death's Shadow

I'M Responsible, I'M Sorry

Rating: 5.0


Bright lights blind us,
tires screech across pavement.

You scream,
I turn hard to the left.

You take the full force of the on coming car,
you are sick and unable to stop bleeding,
you are dead,
I'm fine,
I'm responsible,
I turned the wrong way,
I sacrificed you and don't know why,
I'm sorry.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Nice poem. I liked it. It was written well with great texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Best regards Akmal

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