Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 21,407 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

I Miss You - Poem by Amitava Sur

Believe or not, does not matter to me
I am missing you which is very true,
Day and night every moment,
I am decaying without you.

You loved me, won me
And taught me to dream,
You made me a content soul
Finding out an angel within you.
You made this earth so pleasant to me
And offered a heaven for me.

How could you be so cruel,
That you parted me so soon!
I'm just a stranger now -
Being lost out and forlorn.

Oh' my dear, oh' my love-
Had you decided to part me so soon,
Why have you allured me
And intoxicated with your intense love and lust?
Why did you come in my life
And deserted me in the mid way so soon?


The venom of love, you injected in me
The fragrance and beauty you spread around
I am unable to live but them
Cannot digest the pain anymore.
But now, neither I can love any other one
Nor I can live without you,
As you put me in a fix! !

Believe or not, does not matter to me
I am missing you which is very true.
With ever increasing wounds and thirsts
I am decaying without you.

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Amitava
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Topic(s) of this poem: grief

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem talks about the pain of losing the beloved. It talks about the loneliness & the vacant state of mind.

Comments about I Miss You by Amitava Sur

  • (3/12/2016 8:14:00 PM)


    i could feel all of the pain encompassing your heart and soul. Great write. (Report) Reply

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  • Vivek Mishra (7/2/2014 10:22:00 AM)


    After reading the poem you certainly do :) (Report) Reply

  • (3/23/2014 1:06:00 AM)


    The emptiness that Missing brings is difficult to fill,
    It makes you pain and all in vain,
    And then it breaks your will!

    Very well expressed in this lovely, sweet and sad poem.
    Thank you for reading mine.
    (Report) Reply

  • Beach Girl (3/17/2014 6:50:00 AM)


    Beautifully written poem, yet painful to read. Anyone who has ever lost a loved one can certainly relate the thoughts expressed in this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (9/28/2013 11:26:00 AM)


    a lot of emotion in this poem. very touching write. love a two way street. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (9/22/2013 7:24:00 PM)


    So lovely your poem. The pain of losing a loved one is
    agonizing. Time will heal all of it eventually. It is better
    to love and lost than not to have loved at all. Good penning.
    (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (9/20/2013 6:02:00 AM)


    Sraight from your heart, with all the pain of losing your beloved so beautifully expressed! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 15, 2016


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