Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 11,819 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

I Miss You - Poem by Amitava Sur

I miss you:
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Believe or not, I miss you dear,
Missing so utterly, that's very true.
Day and night every moment,
I'm missing you in my whole and soul.

You loved me, won me
And taught me to dream,
You made me a content soul
Finding out an angel within thee
You made this earth so pleasant
And a heaven for me.

How could you be so cruel,
You parted me so soon!
I’m just a stranger now -
Being lost and abandoned.

Oh’ my dear, oh’ my love,
Had you parted me so soon,
Why did you come in my life
And deserted me so soon!

I miss you dear, oh’ my love
With wounds and thirsts within.
Believe or not, I miss you dear,
Missing so utterly, that's very true.

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Ami tava


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem talks about the pain of losing the beloved. It talks about the loneliness & the vacant state of mind.

Comments about I Miss You by Amitava Sur

  • Rookie - 16 Points Vivek Mishra (7/2/2014 10:22:00 AM)

    After reading the poem you certainly do :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 23,142 Points Sandra Feldman (3/23/2014 1:06:00 AM)

    The emptiness that Missing brings is difficult to fill,
    It makes you pain and all in vain,
    And then it breaks your will!

    Very well expressed in this lovely, sweet and sad poem.
    Thank you for reading mine. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 396 Points Beach Girl (3/17/2014 6:50:00 AM)

    Beautifully written poem, yet painful to read. Anyone who has ever lost a loved one can certainly relate the thoughts expressed in this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (9/28/2013 11:26:00 AM)

    a lot of emotion in this poem. very touching write. love a two way street. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,236 Points Patricia Grantham (9/22/2013 7:24:00 PM)

    So lovely your poem. The pain of losing a loved one is
    agonizing. Time will heal all of it eventually. It is better
    to love and lost than not to have loved at all. Good penning. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,632 Points Hazel Durham (9/20/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    Sraight from your heart, with all the pain of losing your beloved so beautifully expressed! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 23, 2015


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