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Amitava Sur

Veteran Poet - 4,624 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

I miss you

I miss you:
I miss you dear, believe or not,
I miss you …. very true
Day and night every moment,
I'm missing you... my whole and soul.

You loved me won me and taught me to dream,
You made me a content soul
Finding out an angel within thee
This earth became so lovely and a heaven for me.
How could you be so cruel –
You parted me so soon!
I’m just a stranger now -
Lost and abandoned.

Oh’ my dear, oh’ my love,
Had you parted me so soon,
Why did you come in my life
And deserted me so soon!

I miss you dear, oh’ my love
With wounds and thirsts within.
I miss you dear, believe or not
I miss you, very true.

Submitted: Thursday, September 19, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Topic(s): love

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This poem talks about the pain of losing the beloved. It talks about the loneliness & the vacant state of mind.

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  • Bronze Star - 6,066 Points Sandra Feldman (3/23/2014 1:06:00 AM)

    The emptiness that Missing brings is difficult to fill,
    It makes you pain and all in vain,
    And then it breaks your will!

    Very well expressed in this lovely, sweet and sad poem.
    Thank you for reading mine. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Beach Girl (3/17/2014 6:50:00 AM)

    Beautifully written poem, yet painful to read. Anyone who has ever lost a loved one can certainly relate the thoughts expressed in this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,841 Points Patricia Grantham (9/22/2013 7:24:00 PM)

    So lovely your poem. The pain of losing a loved one is
    agonizing. Time will heal all of it eventually. It is better
    to love and lost than not to have loved at all. Good penning. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,933 Points Hazel Durham (9/20/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    Sraight from your heart, with all the pain of losing your beloved so beautifully expressed! (Report) Reply

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