Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 9,410 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Beggar - Poem by Amitava Sur

Oh' my dear, the passers by,
I beg you all to listen a while.
I don't beg any food from you
Not even any money.
I beg you all for a little sleep only -
what I lost for years many.
I beg for a bit of peace also,
For which I am dying so long.
Yes, I beg a little sleep and peace
I beg you give me please.
I'll just sleep for a little while -
I Only will sleep with a peace.

I'm yearning, I'm beckoning
I'm praying and crying for them
But alas, they never come to me
Nor bothered a little even.

I searched for them since long back
But I couldn't get even a bit.
I'm begging now from door to door
With a hope to get a bit.
Can you now, by any means -
Give me a little please.
I'll just sleep for a little while -
I Only will sleep with a peace.

I didn't sleep for a long long time
Also I need a peace in my mind,
I beg a little sleep and peace
I beg you give me please.
I'll just sleep for a little while-
I only will sleep with a peace.
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Amitava (14.5.2013)


Poet's Notes about The Poem

It's about getting completely lost & restless in losing the love & peace from a human life. I tried to draw that picture with pen & paper

Comments about Beggar by Amitava Sur

  • Bronze Star - 2,592 Points Clarence Prince (5/10/2015 11:17:00 AM)

    Yes a Life without sleep and peace
    really needs to cry out and beg!
    Well done, Amitava! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 20,149 Points Roseann Shawiak (2/14/2015 4:05:00 AM)

    Amitava, you are just so very good!! No matter how many times I read read this poem, it is always fresh and new!! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,289 Points Walterrean Salley (10/24/2014 4:51:00 AM)

    I am deeply touched by the sheer humility of this inspiring piece. Peace and rest (natural and spiritual) are most essential among human needs. Thank you much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,393 Points Ramesh Rai (7/2/2014 6:52:00 PM)

    Ultimately every one is beggar. Nice love it. I too have a beggar. Regards. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,641 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/26/2014 6:13:00 AM)

    The precious pearls of peace the humanity is begging from deaf and dumb. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,731 Points Valsa George (6/25/2014 12:16:00 AM)

    Begging not for alms, but for peace and rest! They are perhaps more vital for a man alive in body but dead in spirit! A heart rending plea! It leaves disturbing reverberations! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,149 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/31/2014 4:20:00 AM)

    Begging only for a quiet sleep is such a simple request, not
    answered readily if at all in life. I got lost and restless myself
    within the poem. Captured my sorrowful heart, Amitava,
    you've done well with this one - beautifully imagined. Thank
    you. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,149 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/31/2014 4:15:00 AM)

    Begging only for a quiet sleep and peace, is such a simple request,
    not answered readily, if at all in life. I got lost and restless myself
    within the poem. Captured my sorrowful heart, Amitava, you've
    done well with this one - beautifully imagined.. Thank you. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 150 Points Muhammad Ali (2/3/2014 12:58:00 AM)

    Nice theme poet. Nice poetry too. Is this a thing i can grant! Wonderful.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Maria C. Pires Costa (11/23/2013 6:33:00 AM)

    Lovely lines throughout this special request for a quiet sleep and peace! May God grant you a tranquil, enjoyable time and much hope in your life.
    Thank you for shaing it! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,385 Points Lyn Paul (10/26/2013 7:16:00 AM)

    What thought you have placed in these wonderful words. How we all dream of PEACE. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Jr Cuyam (10/23/2013 11:28:00 AM)

    very creative and unique. a beggar begging not for food but for peace. I will give you Jesus Christ the Prince of Peace. receive Him in your heart and you'll have eternal peace. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,393 Points Ramesh Rai (10/8/2013 10:42:00 PM)

    Through this poem you have depicted new form of beggar. Especially, I like to draw the attention of the money man who has an urgent need of sleep. Indeed a great write. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,123 Points Ken E Hall (10/8/2013 6:49:00 PM)

    Last line perfect I see it peace on earth beyond just sleep poem with deep meaning...regards (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (10/8/2013 5:09:00 AM)

    Wait forever till the end of time,
    to fill love in a jar of peace
    and quench me this thirst
    for this forever i'll be a beggar
    Wait forever till end of time...nice work Amitava! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,891 Points Heather Wilkins (9/28/2013 11:29:00 AM)

    you have done a very good work with pen and paper. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,891 Points Heather Wilkins (9/28/2013 11:24:00 AM)

    someone begging for peace of mind and a little sleep. a well written poem enjoyed 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/28/2013 12:14:00 AM)

    Very nice one..a 10/10 from me: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dipy Hermonite (9/26/2013 6:32:00 AM)

    Loved it. Keep going Amitava. Have rated your poem.

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,794 Points Elena Sandu (9/24/2013 7:52:00 PM)

    A true painting, beautifully penned! Yes when a heart has no more love inside might get so restless that it could dry and die. But some souls could find the key of revival if they could learn that they may had it all wrong, as true love can never die.
    Are we meant to confuse sometimes the possesive love with the unconditional one? Such confusions are great if they bring us on the verge of collapse, from there we get the chance to struggle to find own balance and connect to own true self...Sorry I don't know if I make any sense, your poem filled me with lots of thoughs which I try to clear for myself. I am breaking one of the unwritten law by thinking aloud. I am supposed to talk after thinking but than I will find nothing to say. I loved your poem, thank you! 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 8, 2015


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