I`m lost among futile thoughts
And now afraid of myself,
Because I go through darkness plots
And see by me a fairy elf.
He goes just singing awful song,
That tells about feeble soul,
The time of troubles has not gone,
But I should go to heart goal.
I should just wait and learn this life
To write about stranger`s world,
I have my mind, I must it drive
To do all acts by breast are told.
But I`m so ill without wounds,
I need somebody be my hand.
I shut my heart in hope rooms
And try my future understand.
I need my soul find inside,
I need a friend for my life time,
And routine questions have decide,
And everything in poems rhyme.
Loneliness has never been so well covered as a theme in a poem
A great poem! Again and again you demonstrate the deep insight into life in all it's triumphs and failings.You got the wonderful personality
You ink ran bold with color hope and your appeal is loud and clear with trumpet or cymbals. It is yet another good poem of yours. I echo the same feeling Unwritten soul................. 'I shut my heart in hope rooms And try my future understand. I too join and sing your lyric i need a friend lifetime to share! ha ha ha Genuine feeling of the poet, congrats!
The ink sound so personal this time, but yes you need to believe in yourself...yourself is the best friend and for others, not to blocked them from close to you..they might be your best friends too..to share what life is, to share what happy and hurt about...and how we roll the problem till it sink in the ocean...anyway there's a friend in you for yourself too...a nice poem Eka, and it's like an ink writing about ink story_Unwritten Soul
I should just wait and learn this life ''To write about stranger`s world, I have my mind, I must it drive To do all acts by breast are told.'' i found this stanza full of wisdom...........the theme of the loneliness has been described well....... and you might consider us as your life time friend..........we, the composers of verse, are always one another s friend.
Awesome poem with the rhyme scheme, pleasure to read, and you find friends with this site and you may consider me as one of your friends.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Young and perspective poet. Keep in there!