Neela Nath Das

I Wanna Slip Back - Poem by Neela Nath Das

I wanted to bloom
in the lap of green.
Intolerable it is to
stay as unseen!

I lift up my head
and cast my look.
I see the glum shade,
thru the mirror of brook.

No longer, I stay there,
where joys I lack.
To sleep, in the deep,
I wanna slip back.

Comments about I Wanna Slip Back by Neela Nath Das

  • Gold Star - 19,136 Points Amitava Sur (2/13/2014 7:53:00 PM)

    Lovely lines with a handful of hopes who are getting hindered.
    Sleep - you sleep my dear with lots of nice dreams..... loved it (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,300 Points Anil Kumar Panda (2/13/2014 9:37:00 AM)

    such a sweet drop! ! loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (2/7/2014 11:39:00 AM)

    Thanks friends for leaving inspiring comments. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/7/2014 9:03:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Neela. Beautiful way you have compared nature to life.
    This poem left me wondered...
    Where I wanna slip back
    Is it to the lap of green earth, which is full of joy...
    or looking for joy thru the mirror of brook....Loved reading.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,033 Points Savita Tyagi (2/6/2014 9:41:00 AM)

    Wonderful! Beauty with great depth. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 6, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 6, 2014

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