I Will Make Words Out Of Dreams Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

I Will Make Words Out Of Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Look O, traveller
Before dying
Put your dreams
In the care
Of wind and water
I will make words out of dreams.
From the grime of your corpse
I will come to grow flowers!

(Translated by Samina Amjad)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 21 January 2009

Short and masterful with a title to match-dreams wind flowers, I hope I start again as a flower only I would'nt like to depend on the legs of a bee to complete my love, uavaniceday regards

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Lynda Robson 21 January 2009

Wise words Naseer, as one thing ends another starts, 10 Lynda xx

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Ivor Hogg 22 January 2009

Beautiful my friend.The ultimate in recycling

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. . 22 January 2009

Such a lovely image Naseer. This would bring anyone into a state of peace

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Patti Masterman 22 January 2009

Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem, full of peace.

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Ken E Hall 01 February 2010

A dream of a poem...following natures path showing we all help to push up daises! said more tactful ofcourse, ++++10 regards

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Anjali Sinha 17 January 2010

solid depth in this poem corpse--flowers- -10 anjali

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Emma Adamyan 31 October 2009

u`ve already made and they r wonderful. thx for sharing ur dreams and words

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Lillian Thomas 04 June 2009

The images in this poem are creative and thought-provoking. You manage such honesty of vision and economy of words, my friend.

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Sergey Yarutin 10 April 2009

It is possible to esteem somehow this and another in the original?

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