Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

I wish I could be a kite


Sky looks an angel in orange gown
Birds enchant beautiful sounds
Clouds run to be sky's crown
Winds blowing swiftly
Making themselves proud
Imbibed in rainbow's colors
All shining bright
Aiming for new heights
I wish I could be a kite

Don't want to be propelled
Don't want to be controlled
Want to sail in laminar flow
Without hip hop and without any show
Leaping from one cloud to the other
Dancing and aiming further and further
Without enrolling into fight
Aiming for new heights
I wish I could be a kite

Love to dance with the avians
Nest clouds in thunder & rains
Enjoying as if space's guest
Makig mockery of Mr Everest (Mount Everest)
Far away from everyone's sight
Cherishing the beautiful flight
Aiming for new heights
I wish I could be a kite

Submitted: Saturday, March 10, 2012
Edited: Saturday, February 02, 2013

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Comments about this poem (I wish I could be a kite by Freespirit Juneja )

  • Rookie - 15 Points Swetha Vanakayalapati (6/8/2012 6:34:00 AM)

    it has got a charm and light....to be a kite....like the wish every human has wings... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Renu Kakkar (5/4/2012 2:40:00 AM)

    i like this poem the most from all your poems that i have seen so far...in an innocent way and with spontaneous flow of words, the poem is remarkable...it reminds me of one of the first poems i wrote, ' To be a Cloud '..well done. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,106 Points Hans Vr (4/23/2012 8:59:00 AM)

    Wonderful dream, Let us all be a bit more like a kite.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Steven Cooke (4/22/2012 3:15:00 PM)

    Having seen a number of your poems this is far the best one, It portrays imagery and feeling and is very descriptive. I like this one. Tips on some of the others. When writing about love and matters of the heart keep away from words like lust. love poetry is about the beauty not the act. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Saniya Galeyeva (4/22/2012 2:17:00 PM)

    The feeling of freedom. A good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Okoye Charles Chukwudi (4/21/2012 3:27:00 AM)

    Very nice poem...i really love this...this is the best poem..i hv read, written by you....keep up the good work....a poem written in the spirit of william wordsworth....wandering lonely as a cloud....i wish i could be a kite....thanks for sharing+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Neetha Sasidharan (4/21/2012 3:03:00 AM)

    ha haha a...mockery of mt everest......i liked it v much.....
    nice comparison... keep aiming high.....may ur life be like dat....
    grt poem.. superb rhymes... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (4/20/2012 9:18:00 AM)

    I know that feeling, the wish to fly, as a bird or in your case a kite, a freedom poem, just beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,112 Points Diane Hine (4/20/2012 6:23:00 AM)

    Wonderful soaring fantasy. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,261 Points Neela Nath (4/12/2012 11:29:00 PM)

    Painted the words with the hue of poetic imagination. Splendid! . (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Donna Caldwell (4/12/2012 3:59:00 PM)

    Really liked this poem! Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Jinal Oswal (4/12/2012 10:37:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! A very nice topic indeed... I always dream of being a bird... flying high in the sky.. no limits its just you and no one else... And yes now a kite... I loved this poem.. feeling of independence... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Sankaran Ayya (4/9/2012 6:47:00 AM)

    Opening lines are beautiful. Poets like wind and sky now kites Good poem
    -KAVIN CHARALAN (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Samra Haq (4/8/2012 12:07:00 PM)

    I like your poem, I wish i could be a kite very nice interesting poem. While reading I was thinking that I am kite and I am flying in the sky.Keep it up. Now step by step i will read your poems and write good comments on them. Add me as a friend. Pls see my poems as well and I wrote one poem same on the topic of To Touch The Sky is also related on the topic of Kite. I have a big collection on my poems but I posted 6 of them. Pls read my poems & comment on them. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Gerardino (4/7/2012 11:02:00 AM)

    read 2 times, , great poem, , i can see every word. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Parithi Muthurasan (4/7/2012 8:44:00 AM)

    I dont want to be propelled
    i dont want to be controlled
    I just want to sail in the laminar flow
    Without any hip hop and without any show, .................... very nice and admirable thought (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anubhuti Modi (4/7/2012 6:56:00 AM)

    kite.................beautiful one (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,060 Points Unwritten Soul (4/7/2012 6:11:00 AM)

    Nice to be kite, to wander all spaces and height...it good to feel flying but not all times kite will satisfy you..when the string broken, you will lost to wrong place, and it hurt to fall, then never feel to surrender because once you surrender there's no way to wander the sky again...but if you still not to choose what to be, think it first because when we take a choice take a chance or hurt to get what you want..nice write Sharad thanks for inviting_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie teal Sky (4/7/2012 4:02:00 AM)

    being a kite is actually very depressing, you can get cut, , , , , , , , , , , , , bazinga, just kidding, this poem is great, the very first line is my fav. Winds blowing swiftly to make them proud.nice thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Sanu Puthupallil (4/7/2012 1:16:00 AM)

    GREAT WORK.....
    -SANU (Report) Reply

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