Sky looks an angel in orange gown
Birds enchant beautiful sounds
Clouds run to be sky's crown
Winds blowing swiftly
Making themselves proud
Imbibed in rainbow's colors
All shining bright
Aiming for new heights
I wish I could be a kite
Don't want to be propelled
Don't want to be controlled
Want to sail in laminar flow
Without hip hop and without any show
Leaping from one cloud to the other
Dancing and aiming further and further
Without enrolling into fight
Aiming for new heights
I wish I could be a kite
Love to dance with the avians
Nest clouds in thunder & rains
Enjoying as if space's guest
Makig mockery of Mr Everest (Mount Everest)
Far away from everyone's sight
Cherishing the beautiful flight
Aiming for new heights
I wish I could be a kite
I dont want to be propelled i dont want to be controlled I just want to sail in the laminar flow Without any hip hop and without any show, .................... very nice and admirable thought
I like your poem, I wish i could be a kite very nice interesting poem. While reading I was thinking that I am kite and I am flying in the sky.Keep it up. Now step by step i will read your poems and write good comments on them. Add me as a friend. Pls see my poems as well and I wrote one poem same on the topic of To Touch The Sky is also related on the topic of Kite. I have a big collection on my poems but I posted 6 of them. Pls read my poems & comment on them.
Opening lines are beautiful. Poets like wind and sky now kites Good poem -KAVIN CHARALAN
it has got a charm and light....to be a kite....like the wish every human has wings...
i like this poem the most from all your poems that i have seen so far...in an innocent way and with spontaneous flow of words, the poem is remarkable...it reminds me of one of the first poems i wrote, ' To be a Cloud '..well done.
Very nice poem...i really love this...this is the best poem..i hv read, written by you....keep up the good work....a poem written in the spirit of william wordsworth....wandering lonely as a cloud....i wish i could be a kite....thanks for sharing+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
kite.................beautiful one