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I Wish You Enough!

I wish you enough sun to keep you bright
No matter how dark is your night

I wish you enough rain to fall you in love
No need the passionate plea of above

I wish you enough joy to keep you alive
No matter how toughly you survive

I wish you enough gain to satisfy your desire
No need to ask to require

I wish you enough pain to make you awake
No matter how painful is your ache

I wish you enough loss to remind you of your own
No need to groan or moan

I wish you enough hellos to light your eye
No matter how heavy is the final bye

(2008/10/24)

Submitted: Friday, October 24, 2008
Edited: Friday, December 05, 2008


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  • Shabre Moore (1/21/2009 1:02:00 PM)

    i really do love it no lie its jus......... i can't really explain it though but its jus beautiful really i love it

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  • Fiona Davidson (11/1/2008 2:41:00 PM)

    Lovely heartfelt piece... thank you...

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  • Linda Winchell (11/1/2008 2:11:00 PM)

    I wish you enough of more poems you write
    I wish them to share with others of us on this site!
    Great write! God Bless, Linda

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  • Pure Remedy (11/1/2008 3:17:00 AM)

    your a lil romeo! . i love your work.. so gentle...

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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/27/2008 7:32:00 AM)

    nice wishes for everyone.......well penned

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  • Riquetta Elliott (10/26/2008 10:12:00 PM)

    This is very amazing poem.

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  • Elena Winters (10/26/2008 12:38:00 AM)

    i wish you the best
    because you should be making money for talent like yours
    amazing poem! ! !

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  • *Trusting You* (10/25/2008 11:42:00 PM)

    I love the last 2 lines
    great job
    *Purkey Girl*

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  • Seema Chowdhury (10/25/2008 11:36:00 PM)

    A lovel prayer poem. it shows your tender heart and good wishes for the loved ones. Hope it all comes true. Good Luck! ! !

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  • Ershad Mazumder (10/24/2008 9:29:00 PM)

    Very good dear PN. I like your poems more than mine.

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