luciana isabelle

Rookie (9 february 1993 / france)

I wonder....


Day by day
I watch the same views
The sunrise beautifully
In front of me
Make me feel warmth
Within these extremely
Cold snow
Is this nature?

This morning
I can hear
The bird chirping clearly
Like a whisper through my ears
Bring the beautiful melodies
Within the air
Make me feel calm
Make me feel glad
Make me feel peaceful
Is this nature?

Those rivers
Look like a crystal for me
Cold but still
Make me feel comfortable
Like I’m in the heaven
Continuously
Make me feel happy
Is this nature?

Yeah, it is
No. It was before.
It was indeed calm before

Yeah…
Before
It was destroyed
By our hand, the irresponsible one
Until it became
Like a disaster
Truly a disaster
For the nature,
And for US too…
And again,
Is this nature?

Submitted: Saturday, June 29, 2013
Edited: Saturday, June 29, 2013

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Well, try to make something else...hope you guys like it...
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Comments about this poem (I wonder.... by luciana isabelle )

  • Rookie - 14 Points Alookh (matin) (9/16/2013 3:01:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! a perfect poem....i loved.....and its really true......nature is always generous, but we have always been too greedy to it....unfortunately we are destroying it with our hands....and we forget that it was a gift from God....i did enjoy...................thanx alot! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/15/2013 8:20:00 AM)

    beautiful words wrap an important message that we must address together
    and you writted very well
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luciana Isabelle (7/8/2013 12:38:00 AM)

    agreed...i'm looking forward to your poems too (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,149 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/7/2013 1:06:00 AM)

    Make me feel calm
    Make me feel glad
    Make me feel peaceful
    Is this nature?
    Yes, it is. When everything else goes wrong, it's the mother nature who calms, cools and comforts you. (Report) Reply

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