Piyush Dey

Freshman - 1,138 Points (India)

If i believe


Two pieces of bread and a
glass of water,
i think that enough to quench my
hunger, and in this winter,
i may have nothing more than
this, if i believe,
the road is clear and the
mountains, the misty mountains
just above that road are not steep
and dark,
if i believe that the snow that
covers my path with its tinged
fragrance, is no more devil,
that's enough, that's enough-
to keep me walking,
If i believe, this winter,
this dusky shadow of the
moonlight, will soon disappear,
the spring, of course, will come
with the shiny sunlight,
If i believe that in those cliffs
my dream awaits me and doesn't
let me sleep even for a second,
throughout my journey,
no matter how storm there might
be-
i will climb and i will fall off,
i will start again, but-
i will reach there- to kiss the
sun,
and smile and cry and breath the
very pleasure of my victory,
if i believe....

Submitted: Wednesday, August 06, 2014

Topic of this poem: trust


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  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/24/2015 9:12:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem on firm determination and key to be successful in ones life. Inspiring write. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,828 Points Akhtar Jawad (1/8/2015 8:02:00 PM)

    A firm belief brings determination and it's determination that leads the man to the apex. a nice and beautiful poem...............10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,957 Points Daniel Brick (8/19/2014 7:48:00 PM)

    This a poem of faith, inner strength, hope, belief in the triumph of good will - these are all wonderful things. You certainly show in the fervent way you wrote this that YOU BELIEVE IT. I admire your effort and applaud your poem. But I confess I don't share your faith, strength, hope (see list in 1st line) - but don't let my reaction diminish
    what you believe and don't stop writing poems of optimism. You are very good at this! And many people NEED to hear this message. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,708 Points Amitava Sur (8/13/2014 6:22:00 AM)

    A strong belief can reach a person to a greater height of success or peace provided that belief is in tact.... Thanks for sharing the idea through this poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,307 Points Valsa George (8/10/2014 11:44:00 PM)

    Every thing is possible for a man who believes! This is the hope that should keep pulling us in the face of adversities! Very well put! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,082 Points Valerie Dohren (8/10/2014 6:20:00 AM)

    They say all things are possible, one just needs to believe - very good Plyush, well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,268 Points Neela Nath (8/9/2014 9:55:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem with nice imagery.If anyone gets stuck to one's dream it becomes true. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,580 Points Lyn Paul (8/9/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    So wonderful to believe. And how we must for then we can climb any mountain. Thanks so much (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,166 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/6/2014 11:47:00 PM)

    Enjoyable, one can get through winter on no food, climb the mountains to find one's dreams... if you believe. (Report) Reply

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