Imagination Poem by Noel Horlanda

Imagination

Rating: 5.0


Brilliant concepts as clear as white sun
so bright even fiercin' thickest cloud bun
nev'r bounces back but all the way through
format grand idea just in one throw

But when dark minds meet,
evil thoughts in sync seats
perilous places where no one dares,
creates havoc acts everywhere

Imagine if all the people
chooses wrong side pole,
it's much better to be a beagle
rather than to think as an eagle

Imagine then you belong to
the former lines or two...
no way wou'd I fit
into the latter's defeat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 02 September 2009

Nice piece Noel...very imaginative indeed...like Naseer I hope there are more peole making the right choice.....

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 31 August 2009

very imaginative poem!

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Lady Grace 02 September 2009

well written dear..chosen words are smart..like this piece..

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 September 2009

Imagine if all the people chooses wrong side pole, It never happens that all the people choose wrong side pole. It's against nature's law. Imagine what happens if such imaginations come true? Thoughts are well contended in this poem, Noel. Regards Naseer

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 October 2009

Imagination is formative force with tremendous power. Nice work. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Lingerie-IG* Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2009

Imagine if all the people chooses wrong side pole, it's much better to be a beagle rather than to think as an eagle.what animaginationfrom poet... thenit will beend of good world and end of sweetness too... all plunders loot arson will take place... lovely write dear poet.....10 read mine...God bless only those... i mdisgrace... go back

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Obinna Eruchie 12 September 2009

This is a wonderful piece, its message is true, but imaginative.

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Ejaz Khan 06 September 2009

There's always a natural balance that makes our world what it is, a place where good and bad live side by side and have their eternal strive for supermacy. A thought provoking write!

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Catrina Heart 02 September 2009

lovely brilliant work here my friend............................10

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