Immortality Poem by Crimson Love

Immortality



Drink from the spring of eternity,
Let these fluids consume the soul,
Stay young forever, In a time thats all but forgotten,
Fall prey to immortalities curse,
Staying young forever, while watching love die,
Your words can be written, and unwritten many times,
Loop around and find a place that can stay unchanged,
Forever in a place, thats just like you.
Never moving forward, never leaping back,
You watch the ones you love fall victim to death,
You envy them now, for you death is untouchable,
You live to hope for such a thing to carress you and take you away,
But Dodges you Like the bullet you tried to use,
The wounds are deep, but the red fluid eludes,
Stay forever as deaths prize,
Enticed by a pair of scarlet eyes,
Death lured you into what you wanted, finally letting out a gentle chortle,
' You got what you were seeking, enjoy bieng immortal'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 21 September 2011

Love it. The thought of living forever, Watching all your loved ones pass. Take a look at my new poem called, Spirits of the dead.

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Stefanie Fontker 21 September 2011

Very interesting poetry. You offer an interesting concept here. I like this piece.

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Vipins Puthooran 21 September 2011

Wow, it's a great poem in my sense..(envy to mortals for death is untouchable&live to hope for caress death) wonderful lines but I must say that from the first to last line it's amazing... Add meanings to the title..

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Vipins Puthooran 21 September 2011

Wow, it's a great poem in my sense..(envy to mortals for death is untouchable&live to hope for caress death) wonderful lines but I must say that from the first to last line it's amazing... Add meaning to the title..

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