Sandra Feldman

Impossible Wish - Poem by Sandra Feldman

Oh, if only one could liberate the Soul,
As one does with an imprisoned Dove,
If only Love could fix it all,
Like faith is supposed to do,
With mountains that can move along,
Thru shadows, as the day is long.

I want that Power,
So I can fly to you,
And have a Heaven,
Here on Earth
Made only for us Two.

Comments about Impossible Wish by Sandra Feldman

  • Rookie - 337 Points Dee Corpolongo (8/11/2014 10:20:00 AM)

    Beautiful vision and a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 197 Points Kirti Sharma (7/19/2014 12:49:00 PM)

    beautiful... i really like the rhymes! !
    each line is full of love :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,190 Points Babatunde Aremu (7/9/2014 4:29:00 AM)

    Powerful usage of imagery. I like the poem and the theme. Great write. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,036 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (7/9/2014 3:55:00 AM)

    You said it Sandra. There is nothing that can not be done, for love, as almost all lovers do think. A Brilliantly wrote metaphoric display, it is. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 377 Points Sina Farajzadeh (7/8/2014 12:10:00 AM)

    Hi. There are nice usages of similes in this poem. Good Luck (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,246 Points Valerie Dohren (7/7/2014 7:03:00 AM)

    RHeaven on earth - what a wonderful concept, but a long way away I fear. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,120 Points Mandolyn ... (7/7/2014 12:26:00 AM)

    Let all that you do be in love- That's in 1 corinthians! :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,674 Points Brian Johnston (7/6/2014 8:30:00 PM)

    Oh Dear Poet, haven't you heard? 'It's the thought that counts, ' they say. And if that be true, then the reality of your wish, could not produce a better result than your poem in any case... Your lover lucky indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,642 Points Mr. Nobody (7/6/2014 9:54:00 AM)

    A spectacular write
    outta sight!
    But insight too
    by The Grand Poetess You! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,063 Points Neela Nath Das (7/6/2014 4:58:00 AM)

    Ah! So nice wish! If I were....... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 6, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 6, 2014

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