Imprisoned Poem by Claudia Krizay

Imprisoned

Rating: 5.0


Falling:
Imprisoned, while
Hiding-
Eyes, fixed upon
Mountains of madness-
Chained to the sky,
Yellow hued-
Venus, rising:
Looking;
Shadows,
Reflecting pond-
Angry?
Can you
Believe in
Starlight?
Only when I am
Falling from
Mountains of
Madness
Wishing upon a
Star….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 22 September 2011

Great feel I did get from this poem. Wonderful poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 December 2015

falling, rising, looking, visions, madness, mountains. soooo many images in your wonderful verses. in spite of all your illness, you consider creativity as your grace given by God. i shall pray for you. please dont stop writing and painting. it helps us always mentally. God bless you in your endeavours. tony

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Marcus Mckinley 24 October 2011

the stars twinkle bright when the mind is not clouded. this was an enjoyable read. thanks for sharing

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 October 2011

Boulevard of promises to apoligize being imprisoned with such thoughts and questions unanswered as you have here depicted and delineated..nice attempt and thought provoking write..

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Juan Olivarez 26 September 2011

It must be a terrible thing to live that way at times, however it did not affect your poetry, maybe it even has enhanced it.

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Allemagne Roßmann 25 September 2011

Excellent write and brevity of words added variety to this piece..

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