Cassandra Jasmine

Rookie - 54 Points (United States of Awesomeness)

In My World - Poem by Cassandra Jasmine

In My world,
Poverty shan't exist in our world.
Everybody would be treated with equality,
Yet hard work would always be present.

In My world,
People would be judged by what they could do,
Not by their color, religion, or age,
Nor by their gender, beliefs or looks.

In My world,
Technology may not be so abundant as today,
But the lush green valleys and Nature's way,
Shall never perish, nor shall it die away.

In My world,
Animals would know caution and fear,
But death wouldn't be so cruel, and tragic.
Nor shall any animal be shunned upon.

In My world,
Wars would be but a nightmare,
Dictators would just be a legend,
And love would not be a fantasy.

But what is My world?
It doesn't exist, nor shall it ever occur.
Yet one can dream a million miles,
So, I say, let them dream.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Many people wish for this and that. Everyone does.
You could be stripped of all your possessions, but never your imagination. If one were to dream, who is to stop them?

Comments about In My World by Cassandra Jasmine

  • Gold Star - 5,407 Points Rajesh Thankappan (3/3/2015 9:28:00 PM)

    Though some of our ideas may sound a bit Utopian yet we can realize some of them. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,154 Points Mj Lemon (2/27/2015 8:12:00 PM)

    Yes we all can, probably should, dream. Amazing poem. Just awesome. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Secretly Unknown (2/25/2015 6:41:00 PM)

    Dreams...
    I love your dreams, dreams that rarely are dreamt now a days.
    Children dream for video games, a new computer. But you dreams are 10/10. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ethan Ying (9/25/2013 9:00:00 PM)

    Beautiful, Cassandra, just beautiful! I totally love the note too.
    Plus, I like the last stanza:
    But what is My world?
    It doesn't exist, nor shall it ever occur.
    Yet one can dream a million miles,
    So, I say, let them dream.

    I LOVE dreaming. Good job, girl! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,973 Points Sandra Feldman (9/25/2013 6:45:00 PM)

    What beautiful thoughts
    What beautiful feeling
    Your world certainly is
    , More than appealing
    S F (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,973 Points Sandra Feldman (9/25/2013 6:02:00 PM)

    Yes one can dream of a better world,
    And fight and scream, until you're heard.

    You're beautiful, idealistic poem makes us conscious of how imperfect our society is and how much there is yet to do.They even want to take away, the little positive we have today. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,421 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/25/2013 10:50:00 AM)

    And thanks for the wise and beautiful note.
    'You could be stripped of all your possessions, but never your imagination. If one were to dream, who is to stop them? '
    Simply loved it! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,421 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/25/2013 10:45:00 AM)

    Oh how wonderful a poem this is! You have painted a sweet world, ideal for the humankind.
    The last stanza is simply superb, priceless!
    'But what is My world?
    It doesn't exist, nor shall it ever occur.
    Yet one can dream a million miles,
    So, I say, let them dream.'
    I love to dream! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/23/2013 10:12:00 AM)

    Your world is ideal.very inspiring poem...awesome lines.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (9/22/2013 12:35:00 PM)

    WOoooooooooooow! ....Cassandra? ! ! ! ! ....u did write a poem....this one is unique! really particular dear! im gonna add it to my fave poem list....a perfect piece....that i can find no problem in it....really CHEER! ! ! ! ! ; D (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 21, 2013


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