Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 4,045 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

In The Dark - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

The lights are gone
we are in the dark
the world will not see
when the sun goes down

We have no one to blame
but ourselves
we ruined what we had
and destroyed
what God had left

Comments about In The Dark by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (9/14/2013 6:23:00 AM)

    brief, meaningful, particular, powerful and true..... i regret for this world.....how beautiful it could be if we were not this much greedy! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Alla Simone (8/31/2013 8:24:00 PM)

    A glimpse into what the future would be if man were to continue ruining the earth. This is a piece that invokes thought. I enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 565 Points Subbaraman N V (8/24/2013 3:37:00 AM)

    True! Let us honestly attempt to redeem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (8/23/2013 9:24:00 AM)

    In The Dark by Dave Alan Walker Hon. poet has worked nicely in fact we are digging our grave.....thank you (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,964 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (8/23/2013 12:51:00 AM)

    Wow an environmentalist tune poem! Super job with d flow n theme poet Dave (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,964 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (8/23/2013 12:49:00 AM)

    Ah wow an envirönmental poem so gooood! Super job in flow n theme too. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 880 Points Vizard Dhawan (8/22/2013 7:30:00 PM)

    very well said
    a nice poetry to read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,747 Points Lyn Paul (8/22/2013 9:38:00 AM)

    Wonderful words Dave. I am sure we all have a big understanding of exactly where you are coming from. how will it be in another 20 years? thank You (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,413 Points Valerie Dohren (8/22/2013 9:07:00 AM)

    We did indeed Dave - and well done from me on reaching the no 1 slot. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (8/21/2013 5:18:00 PM)

    nature is to be protected not destroyed by man. but they are doing a pretty good job of it good read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Inas Essa (8/21/2013 4:33:00 PM)

    very well written Dave, thanks for sharing it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alireza Asgari (8/21/2013 3:37:00 PM)

    my people Iranian guys during the history they always had blamed others rather to blame themselves for their mistakes and lags.we have to blame ourselves first then blame others with a definite vision.
    your poem sir is so great :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,927 Points Hazel Durham (8/21/2013 10:06:00 AM)

    Straight to the point and so beautifully expressed!
    Congratulations Dave on reaching the top. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,109 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/21/2013 6:56:00 AM)

    We destroy nature and don't care about consequences. Message conveyed beautifully. Also congratulations on reaching the top. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,869 Points David Wood (8/21/2013 5:46:00 AM)

    Very true words Dave. A good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,006 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/20/2013 10:16:00 PM)

    Congratulations, Dave...You have reached the top... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (8/20/2013 3:58:00 PM)

    its time for men to wake up and change the world if they ever will. good write87541 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 368 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/20/2013 12:27:00 PM)

    Darkness exist when you prevents the entry of light. But light is there, out side, waiting for your turn. Is up to us let it come in or not. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/20/2013 9:07:00 AM)

    Very well said..We have destroyed....Beautiful poem with great message. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (8/20/2013 4:28:00 AM)

    So true....we are responsible for what we are reaping. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 20, 2013

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