The lights are gone
we are in the dark
the world will not see
when the sun goes down
We have no one to blame
but ourselves
we ruined what we had
and destroyed
what God had left
A great spiritual write. we are now destroying the world. we are now sufferer.
We have no one to blame but ourselves truth there, Dave.
Very well said..We have destroyed....Beautiful poem with great message.
brief, meaningful, particular, powerful and true..... i regret for this world.....how beautiful it could be if we were not this much greedy!
A glimpse into what the future would be if man were to continue ruining the earth. This is a piece that invokes thought. I enjoyed it.
In The Dark by Dave Alan Walker Hon. poet has worked nicely in fact we are digging our grave.....thank you
Wow an environmentalist tune poem! Super job with d flow n theme poet Dave
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ah wow an envirönmental poem so gooood! Super job in flow n theme too.