Valsa George


Inaudible Language - Poem by Valsa George

There is
an invisible connect,
between
two hearts in love.
Conjuring
wonders out of the blue
of which
others have no clue,
Making the presence
magnetic
Rendering everything
electric.
Concealed
from others
Hardly perceived
by anyone
Rarely identified!

But,
an inaudible language
speaks it aloud,
the language
of the eyes
the language
of the heart

A glitter
in the cornea
A flutter
of the eyelid
An accelerated
rhythm
making the heart
heave
high and low
If observed intent!


Comments about Inaudible Language by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 16,407 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (11/25/2014 12:20:00 PM)

    Silence and symbols speak louder than words when love surfaces between two hearts.....Valsa.......this is
    definitely an amazing piece penned wonderfully.........10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,929 Points Heather Wilkins (8/3/2013 12:41:00 PM)

    a lovely write two in love need not speak the heart will speak for you nice thought (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,193 Points Patricia Grantham (7/28/2013 6:27:00 PM)

    Action speaks louder than words. A lovely smile or even a tender touch
    shows a love so beautiful and tender. Love that shows so everybody
    knows. Very good. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,608 Points Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 4:35:00 AM)

    so far my exprrience count language of love is more audible n can b read easily. you may please visit my page.LANGUAGE OF LOVE. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,126 Points Kee Thampi (7/27/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    love spread its ripples on the shore of...

    the language
    of the eyes
    the language
    of the heart (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,181 Points Savita Tyagi (7/24/2013 8:39:00 AM)

    This quiet language of love speaks louder than words. It's a real pleasure to read this lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/22/2013 10:02:00 AM)

    A well elucidated poem.I love it. Let me quote Kumaran Assan, Melokke pulakamarnniduma yuvavu yen /Charathu koodi nadakolkil randu perkkum / kalangu mingum idarum hrudayam thudikkum / bhalam viyarkkum oru minnalakathu payum This is the tension of love. Or beloved will stand like Sakuntala as if thorn struck her heel looking back to see the lover passed by. This is a very picturesque poem. I give 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,930 Points Soulful Heart (7/19/2013 3:07:00 AM)

    intri cacies of love indeed r mysterious..... words woven as sequins into the silky feelings.... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,446 Points Somanathan Iyer (7/18/2013 4:05:00 AM)

    an excellent write. silence speaks many a words. nice to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/17/2013 3:50:00 PM)

    Sweet! Thanks for sharing this one, it is a beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 967 Points Shahzia Batool (7/17/2013 3:06:00 AM)

    Light, and logical for its subject, you carried forward John Donne's point about the language the souls speak in bonding..reference to poem Extasie...! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,553 Points Valerie Dohren (7/16/2013 12:59:00 PM)

    The language of love is often silent - expressed beautifully here Valsa, a lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/16/2013 12:52:00 PM)

    Extremely Beautiful..I loved reading it....Well said...Inaudible language expressed in audible way.
    Thank you for sharing with us. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/16/2013 12:48:00 PM)

    Extremely Beautiful..I loved reading it....Well said...Inaudible language expressed in audible way.
    Thank you for sharing with us. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (7/16/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    Love breeds love and so this language is perfectly visible, I feel.
    A poem that falls into our minds like a silk thread to tie a new knot of love again.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 657 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (7/16/2013 1:53:00 AM)

    The invisible connect making the presence magnetic and every thing electric with the inaudible language of the eyes, the language of the heart with a glitter in the cornea and the flutter of the eyelid accelerating the rhythm of the heart- -I'm repeating your poem, I suppose- -are beautiful words describing the love messages is fitting


    Inaudible language is made audible in your exemplary poem so fitting, Valsa! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 403 Points Danny Draper (7/15/2013 3:08:00 PM)

    An eloquent and gentle set of observations in this fine write and wonderfully crafted poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,083 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/15/2013 9:56:00 AM)

    Message of the eye is very deep indeed. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,502 Points Kavya . (7/15/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    the language of love can be understood only if the other person is also in love.........a v gud write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (7/15/2013 5:27:00 AM)

    We all make love first with our eyes and hope that love is returned in the eyes of others. A lovely poem Valsa. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 15, 2013


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