Valsa George


Inaudible Language


There is
an invisible connect,
between
two hearts in love.
Conjuring
wonders out of the blue
of which
others have no clue,
Making the presence
magnetic
Rendering everything
electric.
Concealed
from others
Hardly perceived
by anyone
Rarely identified!

But,
an inaudible language
speaks it aloud,
the language
of the eyes
the language
of the heart

A glitter
in the cornea
A flutter
of the eyelid
An accelerated
rhythm
making the heart
heave
high and low
If observed intent!

Submitted: Sunday, July 14, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 15, 2013

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  • Patricia Grantham (7/28/2013 6:27:00 PM)

    Action speaks louder than words. A lovely smile or even a tender touch
    shows a love so beautiful and tender. Love that shows so everybody
    knows. Very good. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 4:35:00 AM)

    so far my exprrience count language of love is more audible n can b read easily. you may please visit my page.LANGUAGE OF LOVE. (Report) Reply

  • Kee Thampi (7/27/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    love spread its ripples on the shore of...

    the language
    of the eyes
    the language
    of the heart (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (7/24/2013 8:39:00 AM)

    This quiet language of love speaks louder than words. It's a real pleasure to read this lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/22/2013 10:02:00 AM)

    A well elucidated poem.I love it. Let me quote Kumaran Assan, Melokke pulakamarnniduma yuvavu yen /Charathu koodi nadakolkil randu perkkum / kalangu mingum idarum hrudayam thudikkum / bhalam viyarkkum oru minnalakathu payum This is the tension of love. Or beloved will stand like Sakuntala as if thorn struck her heel looking back to see the lover passed by. This is a very picturesque poem. I give 10 (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (7/19/2013 3:07:00 AM)

    intri cacies of love indeed r mysterious..... words woven as sequins into the silky feelings.... (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (7/17/2013 3:06:00 AM)

    Light, and logical for its subject, you carried forward John Donne's point about the language the souls speak in bonding..reference to poem Extasie...! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (7/16/2013 12:52:00 PM)

    Extremely Beautiful..I loved reading it....Well said...Inaudible language expressed in audible way.
    Thank you for sharing with us. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (7/16/2013 12:48:00 PM)

    Extremely Beautiful..I loved reading it....Well said...Inaudible language expressed in audible way.
    Thank you for sharing with us. (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (7/16/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    Love breeds love and so this language is perfectly visible, I feel.
    A poem that falls into our minds like a silk thread to tie a new knot of love again.. (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (7/16/2013 1:53:00 AM)

    The invisible connect making the presence magnetic and every thing electric with the inaudible language of the eyes, the language of the heart with a glitter in the cornea and the flutter of the eyelid accelerating the rhythm of the heart- -I'm repeating your poem, I suppose- -are beautiful words describing the love messages is fitting


    Inaudible language is made audible in your exemplary poem so fitting, Valsa! (Report) Reply

  • Danny Draper (7/15/2013 3:08:00 PM)

    An eloquent and gentle set of observations in this fine write and wonderfully crafted poem. (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (7/15/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    the language of love can be understood only if the other person is also in love.........a v gud write (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (7/15/2013 5:27:00 AM)

    We all make love first with our eyes and hope that love is returned in the eyes of others. A lovely poem Valsa. (Report) Reply

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