(virginia, usa)

What do you think this poem is about?

into my skin

tossing petals
downwind
attracts wing hunters
thought of crums
from morning leftover

i keep to myself
words spoken
that you and me heard
rousing giggles beneath those palms
within unblinking eyes
of a raven

i loosen my laces
letting my shoes fall
feeling sharp stubs of grass
sending painful
stings to my brain

like those new manicured
fingernails
of yours
digging into my skin

Submitted: Wednesday, September 17, 2008


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  • Tatianna Rei Moonshadow (12/20/2008 9:17:00 PM)

    I love the last two stanzas of this piece, very vivid.

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  • June Feir-Cruz (9/17/2008 1:12:00 PM)

    Wow! AP - this is a bit risque - but awesome and sexy! !

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