sagar patil.

Rookie - 2 Points (03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

Is It Love Thats Captured Me - Poem by sagar patil.

now a day i sleep less or dream more
at through god has something..
good in store
at heart a prince
not a beggar anymore

is it love thats captured me?
a strange unknown ecstasy
the shore which these
road cover
are draped with a sheet of flowers
from the time i have met
u my lover
my life has been full of happiness showers

is it love thats captured me?
a strange unknown ecstasy

look at this world under this blue blue sky
more & more colors adding by
the desires which were sleeping
have been woken by you
my path you are showered
with you thoughts true...


every day you come seems
why do you come in this land of my dreams
come silently sometimes
in my arms confines
t is your thoughts in darkness or light
some strange intoxication..in your eyes
in my dreams, question & answers
you are there
i ll steal & bring you to
my thought here, .........


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Comments about Is It Love Thats Captured Me by sagar patil.

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (8/26/2012 1:05:00 PM)

    Wow! Being caught by such a vivid event is a miracle but if not acted properly, it may hurt later! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! I love this deep and touching write! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 7,714 Points Neela Nath (8/25/2012 10:24:00 AM)

    So melodious! The rhyming lines are acting like the cherry on top. Stupendous! Thanks for sharing.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (8/25/2012 8:30:00 AM)

    I guess you are.... you get captured by it, be careful act soft if you want silky touch and act rough will leave you hurt...the feeling game is tricky....it's hard when you get captured by feelings but better than captured by ghost hahaha_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 323 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/24/2012 9:08:00 PM)

    What a wonderful words. Again rhythm, like a music. Well done. I love it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 24, 2012



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