Treasure Island

Min Sia


Journey of Love


Love they say is the final term
Uplifts ones life in any turn
Souls would freed unveiling its power
Summoning life in any matter

With love you can look beyond
Exemplifies nothing just be on the road
Journey full of commodities
First class cabin with all your seats

Absorbing all those what you see
Leaving nothing even those least
Depending on route which way to flee
Eye's plenty of tasty candies

Why should I think of something else?
If there's still one journey left
Going back to the starting line
OH! It's so good to reminisce tonight!

Submitted: Monday, December 15, 2008

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  • Ben Gieske (2/3/2009 10:57:00 AM)

    You take us on a pleasant journey with your reminiscences of love. Sometimes the fun is trying to get there instead of being at the end. But love has no end. (Report) Reply

  • Moushumi moushumi (12/29/2008 8:23:00 AM)

    'uplifts ones life in any turn'! how magical & paradoxical journey of love.you rightly described. keep sharing.100+ (Report) Reply

  • Blue Eyes (12/27/2008 9:45:00 PM)

    love is talked about in hundreds of ways and urs that i really like, srry other poets its the best yet written. (Report) Reply

  • Alex Millow (12/22/2008 1:56:00 PM)

    You have the heart of Emily Dickinson and the wisdom of Robert frost, beautiful.9/10 (Report) Reply

  • Lauren Davis (12/18/2008 8:27:00 AM)

    love is a very big thing in every ones life. it was from your heart all the words.1oo out of 100 for that. well done (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (12/16/2008 4:33:00 AM)

    a good 'love journey' in the night, i presume...poem sweet and soft...written in beautifully worded lines...good work, Min...10 (Report) Reply

  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (12/15/2008 8:53:00 AM)

    The world that seem
    like a nighmare
    is turn into lovely dream
    when i saw it with specs
    of love.
    Good work...... (Report) Reply

  • Anjali Sinha (12/15/2008 7:50:00 AM)

    wow lovely
    i like your journey of love
    ill take some cues from it
    thank God i feel im on the
    right path
    ++10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Ency Bearis (12/15/2008 7:39:00 AM)

    I'll take that journey too..it must be an enjoyable one...lovely one...

    Ency Bearis (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (12/15/2008 5:25:00 AM)

    I like the way built up the poem slowly, with apt words and ended it quite beautifully.
    'if there is still one journey left
    going back to the starting line
    oh! it is so good to reminisce tonight'
    good, good. (Report) Reply

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