Journey Of Love Poem by Min Sia

Journey Of Love

Rating: 5.0


Love they say is the final term
Uplifts ones life in any turn
Souls would freed unveiling its power
Summoning life in any matter

With love you can look beyond
Exemplifies nothing just be on the road
Journey full of commodities
First class cabin with all your seats

Absorbing all those what you see
Leaving nothing even those least
Depending on route which way to flee
Eye's plenty of tasty candies

Why should I think of something else?
If there's still one journey left
Going back to the starting line
OH! It's so good to reminisce tonight!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 15 December 2008

I like the way built up the poem slowly, with apt words and ended it quite beautifully. 'if there is still one journey left going back to the starting line oh! it is so good to reminisce tonight' good, good.

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Ency Bearis 15 December 2008

I'll take that journey too..it must be an enjoyable one...lovely one... Ency Bearis

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Anjali Sinha 15 December 2008

wow lovely i like your journey of love ill take some cues from it thank God i feel im on the right path ++10 anjali

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Tom Balch 15 December 2008

What a lovely journey,10/10 Tom

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 15 December 2008

The world that seem like a nighmare is turn into lovely dream when i saw it with specs of love. Good work......

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

Souls would freed unveiling its power Summoning life in any matter Rachel Ann Butler

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Ben Gieske 03 February 2009

You take us on a pleasant journey with your reminiscences of love. Sometimes the fun is trying to get there instead of being at the end. But love has no end.

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Moushumi moushumi 29 December 2008

'uplifts ones life in any turn'! how magical & paradoxical journey of love.you rightly described. keep sharing.100+

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Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

love is talked about in hundreds of ways and urs that i really like, srry other poets its the best yet written.

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Alex Millow 22 December 2008

You have the heart of Emily Dickinson and the wisdom of Robert frost, beautiful.9/10

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