Judgement Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

Judgement

Rating: 4.7


Where we are
Do you dare to speak
Are you natural in here
Where is your so called identity
We are feeling the feelings
Of others not ours
We speak for others
Not for ourselves
Where is our naturalness
We are just imitators
Imitation, Imitation
Silence!
I hear the court is in session
Can't you smell 'His' way
Yes, yes
We are experiencing it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Divya Divya B 29 November 2011

ya we have become imitators and forget about our ownness though simple but tells the truth what all happening around us10

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lover of poetry sweet 20 August 2011

imitation its the only thing we are doing. great work

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Raeanne Furfaro 12 August 2011

YES! ! I can relate to this poem. For one so young you have a grasp on the heartache and outrage one feels when betrayed. I love the imagery. What I said may not be your intent, but poetry is what the other person gets out of it I believe. This poem spoke to me. Beautiful flow of words of outrage and yearning at the same time. Love it

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Louis Cecile 01 August 2011

Interesting concept and quite a different way to tackle the subject. The poem certainly sets up the scene...leaving more of a mystery.

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Joseph Poewhit 21 July 2011

Feeling others feelng - far out

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