Just Before Death Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Just Before Death

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You gave food to me when I needed food,
you gave water to me when I needed it,
you touched my head and played with my horn,
I still feel your palm on my neck and on my back,
in fact you touched my heart,
though you kept me chained
but walking with you in the early morning,
with one end of the chain around my neck,
and the other in your hands,
was a pleasureful beginning of a new day,
wherever I needed, you were there,
but in this fearful moment when I needed you most
the butcher has tied my legs,
and I see a sharp knife in his sadistic hands,
I am missing you, where are you?
It was my fault, I forgot you are a human!
The worst animal on the face of this earth!
Oh death! You give us only physical pains,
Oh life! One cannot define the pains you give.
Good Bye Master! So long if we meet again,
and for ever if it's all over,
I forgive you for your missing in the time of need,
as your love was main attraction in my life.
I am going to die with a single protest,
if you had to do it,
you wouldn't have loved me so much!

Tuesday, September 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 16 September 2016

So powerful, so dramatic, so emotional yet so real. A very poignant poem with a great message. Thanks for sharing, Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2016

Love touched heart and spirit through service and that is why this comes in mind always. But fearful moment of saying good bye puzzles mind. Separation is painful. Life and death and love and life run like this only. Very amazing sharing.10

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Kelly Kurt 14 September 2016

A powerfully written piece, Akhtar.

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M Asim Nehal 14 September 2016

The feelings of sacrificial animals was nicely written, we with human heart seldom care for others but here in this case when you are ordered to sacrifice the best you have we find an escape route....Thought provoking poem.We seldom understand that we are asked to sacrifice our false Ego, Material possessions and inhumane things.10+

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Rajnish Manga 16 September 2016

You have have nicely understood and interpreted the spirit of the poem penned by Akhtar Jawad Sahab. Thank you, Asim ji.

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