Treasure Island

Mckenzi Lew

(11.4.93 / i wanna be in the bahamas)

Just One More?


so, yeah you say you love me but how do i know its real?
because you've said it to other girls but you forgot to 'seal the deal'
am i gonna be the next one to go or am i gonna stay a while?
do you even mean it when you say, 'baby, i love you and you make me smile? '
a lot of questions, i know. but i need an answer soon
i dont wanna sit around all day to wait on you.
so decide real quick, before i hit the door -
do you really love me?
or am i just one more?

Submitted: Saturday, February 09, 2008

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  • Mandy MMR (2/13/2008 7:45:00 PM)

    amazing! i love the bluntness of it... this is something every guy should know! (Report) Reply

  • Vision Ghost (2/12/2008 2:08:00 PM)

    A very simple sentiment is delivered here, so much so that it reminds one that sometimes the basics of love and relationships is constantly over looked. I feel somewhat your a wise cookie. Stay that way. (Report) Reply

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