Mckenzi Lew

Rookie (11.4.93 / i wanna be in the bahamas)

Just One More? - Poem by Mckenzi Lew

so, yeah you say you love me but how do i know its real?
because you've said it to other girls but you forgot to 'seal the deal'
am i gonna be the next one to go or am i gonna stay a while?
do you even mean it when you say, 'baby, i love you and you make me smile? '
a lot of questions, i know. but i need an answer soon
i dont wanna sit around all day to wait on you.
so decide real quick, before i hit the door -
do you really love me?
or am i just one more?


Comments about Just One More? by Mckenzi Lew

  • Rookie Gina PrettyBrownEyes (4/7/2008 2:34:00 PM)

    I love the intenisty in this and the accusing tone; it makes it a powerful read. nice job! :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shalayna Kay (2/24/2008 2:01:00 PM)

    you said it very well! && yes every guy should know this!
    i love all your poems.! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mandy MMR (2/13/2008 7:45:00 PM)

    amazing! i love the bluntness of it... this is something every guy should know! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vision Ghost (2/12/2008 2:08:00 PM)

    A very simple sentiment is delivered here, so much so that it reminds one that sometimes the basics of love and relationships is constantly over looked. I feel somewhat your a wise cookie. Stay that way. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 9, 2008



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