Fay Slimm

Rookie - 32 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Keeping It Simple. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Affairs of the heart can be weighty,
Demanding our all, suffice to say
If that goes too far we can create
A monster, posing as love, which lays
Down innumerable rules. How to say what,
When to go there, fear is the worst part
Of pseudo-affairs. Sharing forgotten
Simplicity rare, caring departs
And sad hearts know nothing of romance.
Keeping laughter in love begets delight.
Bringing joy to our passion advances
Closeness. Shall we try 'simple' tonight?

Comments about Keeping It Simple. by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (6/13/2009 7:06:00 PM)

    Life would be so much easier wouldn't it...less hastle all around...your advice Fay my friend is a keeper for sure....well penned my lovely....keep'm coming (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Gordon Wilkinson (6/13/2009 6:04:00 AM)

    ah simple beats the complications - 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (6/13/2009 5:46:00 AM)

    keeping it simple is an asset..simplicity is beauty..grace (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/13/2009 5:39:00 AM)

    Charming composition- yes we should try simple- 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (6/13/2009 5:18:00 AM)

    wow! you are an authority on matters of heart. well written.nice thioughts.voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 13, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 18, 2009

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