''Kissing Rain'' Poem by seemakhera (Aanamika 805)

interesting poem, Just watch out for the tyops and tense.... I like the simple concept of kissing the rain and seeing sorrows washed away..........

in the peom 'RAIN' is used more as a symbol than the real rain..could be a benediction, could be a divine intervention, could be a panacia for all injuries that oozes blood and tears. nice poem..every soul in worries and stress and strain need such rains..let the almighty shower on the poet and on all mortals...

It is a very beautiful poem on rain. I like rain as well because when it rains it removes many people's pain and give them relief. Keep Writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Nice work on the healing prowess of the gods of rain.

rain and pain good combo, cheer up life is full of ups and downs, no one is happy regards vm

Shalini said it right i guess... :) just kidding. I really liked it..I love getting drenched in the rain because of such special qualities of it.

if rain always stays as u have said in the middle, it will cause more pain in form of floods... rain in moderate level is good..

A LOVELY POEM ON RAIN...A GIFT OF GOD..TAKING AWAY ALL YOUR PAIN...READ MY POEM 'A FINGERS TOUCH ON ME'

I will bottle the ocean and make it quench your thirst He gave me a gift, RAIN.... it washed out all my sorrow... we gain the rain...

master piece and I think this is the bet in your poetry.. loved it..and the way you did in heartfelt stanzas is sweet and soul touching..really a sweet and menaingful poem..10/10