Kuch Lamhe Saath Unke Poem by Uzefa Rashida M.A

Kuch Lamhe Saath Unke

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Kuch lamhe saath unke, kya guzaare
kayi raat aankhoN hi aankhoN me guzaare
Na din me chain na raaton me rahat
Unke deedar ki chahat me har pal guzaare
unki baatein, unki haseen muskurahat jab yaad aayi
Ab khwaish hardam yehi ke zindagee sang unke guzaare.

Ye thi hamari halath jab humne apni chahat
ku paane me apne saari raat saare din guzaare
Ab ye waqt aisa hai ki hum ye kehte hain
ab tak beete hamare zindagee humne kaise sang unke guzaare.

Monday, April 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,urdu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anas Affan 06 April 2016

Nice lines.........good meaning keep on writing thank you for sharing

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 December 2017

A refined poetic imagination, M. A. U. R. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 April 2016

Kya baat hei Rashida! ! Beautiful poetry. Like to read again and again.

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M Asim Nehal 18 April 2016

Wah wah, Ye woh haseen lamhe hain jinhe kaid karna hai, kahin yeh hath se phisal na jaaye..... Bahut Khoob. Mash Allah....as usual 10+++

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Aarifa Almas 17 April 2016

Ma sha Allah.. Kitne khubsurat alfaz hain.. Qaabil e taareef.. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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Salman Sayeed 17 April 2016

The consonant you have use at the beginning each syllable in a line of verse its vary fantastic. Good idea you have created to write this types of poems. Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing

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Uzefa Rashida M.A

Uzefa Rashida M.A

Pernambut, Vellore District, Tamil nadu, India
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