Shahzia Batool

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Lagi Ik Umr! - Poem by Shahzia Batool

Lagi ik umr lekin
phir samajh mein aa gai mujh ko
mukhalif samt chalti
her hawa batlaa gai mujh ko
k apni zindagi jeenay ka yeh
behtar qareena he
saharay dhoondna chhorro
saharay baantnaa seekho
keh yeh roshan haqeeqat he
sahara dhoondnay waalay
sada tanha hi rehte hen

Comments about Lagi Ik Umr! by Shahzia Batool

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/15/2015 8:27:00 AM)

    Kya baat hai......Umda ghazal hai. (Report) Reply

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  • Muhammad Ali (1/7/2014 10:49:00 AM)

    ye ek sad poem hy.
    ye poem sachi b hy.
    haqiqat udas q krti hy!
    shayad 'umeed' lagany waly udas hoty hn. or haqiqat bhoolny waly bhi.
    m ny bachpan me ek sher parha tha.
    'm Tujh sy na maangu, to na maangu ga kisi sy.
    m Tera hun, Tu mera Khuda, mera Khuda hy' (Report) Reply

  • Passionate Reader Passionate Reader (8/18/2013 4:53:00 AM)

    Indeed a meditating message, something to ponder upon! ! ! Your poetry is always with a strong message. while reading this poem, i felt as if you have written down my feelings here because i feel the same way :)))
    so hats off to you dear poet for presenting this notable message in a beautiful way. The last lines grabbed my whole attention and i just can't help reading them again and again :))) (Report) Reply

  • Payal Parande (8/11/2013 4:54:00 AM)

    Thousands of candles can be lighted from a single candle, and the life of the candle will not be shortened. Happiness never decreases by being shared.
    an inspirational write by a brilliant poet.... bravo didi (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan Yasmeen Khan (8/8/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    Great inspirational write...a precious message(Zanagi ka saliqa yehi hey) (Report) Reply

  • Poet's Fan (8/8/2013 3:51:00 AM)

    wish i had its english translation, , , : ( (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (8/7/2013 5:00:00 PM)

    saharay dhoondna chhorro
    saharay baantnaa seekho
    keh yeh roshan haqeeqat he
    sahara dhoondnay waalay
    sada tanha hi rehte hen
    beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (8/7/2013 7:05:00 AM)

    Beautiful Urdu poem. Loved reading it... (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (8/7/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    Yes, You have!
    I wish time could give you a chance to translate the whole poem!
    thank you so much! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/7/2013 6:32:00 AM)

    Another beautiful Urdu poem.
    saharay dhoondna chhorro (Don't seek support)
    saharay baantnaa seekho (Learn to provide support)
    Beautiful rendering. Have I caught the meaning? Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2013

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