Last Lines Poem by Seema Aarella

Last Lines

Rating: 5.0


‘Here are those desires,
Silenced forever,
Born helpless and dead,
In what is now a futile womb,
And congested graveyard.'
Thus reads the epitaph...imprinted on my heart.

Saturday, August 29, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 August 2009

a very deep sad poem....10

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R.k Das 29 August 2009

read it again and again... it was as if i have written these lines, , lastlines...thanx 'congested graveyard', , , omg

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 26 October 2009

i bow to you for the style used to convey this touching feeling. shan

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Kee Thampi 04 September 2009

poet never held up in a forge for writes Here are those desires, Silenced forever, Born helpless and dead, here this poet write beyond it

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 September 2009

Beautifully sad and deep write, Seema. Cannot say much....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 August 2009

beautiful sorrow, sorrowful beauty! ! encompassed love word by word verse by verse! 10+

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Obinna Eruchie 30 August 2009

Loss of your beloved who has departed and now among the among the death. A sad poem.

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