Herbert Guitang

Leaf (Haiku) - Poem by Herbert Guitang

Fresh and Green to touch
Yellow then turns to dried Brown
Like our Age that Flies

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Morals have gone to extinction

Comments about Leaf (Haiku) by Herbert Guitang

  • Silver Star - 3,221 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (5/28/2015 9:48:00 PM)

    A good Haiku and very nice comparison of a leaf and age. Try using small letters and not capitalization, the poem would look better that way. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 201 Points Bernadette Fernandez (5/25/2015 8:38:00 PM)

    Time flies and our generations will leave but live (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 307 Points Nancy Oyula (1/28/2015 12:43:00 AM)

    I love Haiku........ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 27, 2014

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