Herbert Guitang

Leaf (Haiku) - Poem by Herbert Guitang

Fresh and Green to touch
Yellow then turns to dried Brown
Like our Age that Flies

Topic(s) of this poem: aspiration

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Morals have gone to extinction

Comments about Leaf (Haiku) by Herbert Guitang

  • Silver Star - 3,221 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (5/28/2015 9:48:00 PM)

    A good Haiku and very nice comparison of a leaf and age. Try using small letters and not capitalization, the poem would look better that way. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 201 Points Bernadette Fernandez (5/25/2015 8:38:00 PM)

    Time flies and our generations will leave but live (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 442 Points Nancy Oyula (1/28/2015 12:43:00 AM)

    I love Haiku........ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 27, 2014

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