Ahmad Shiddiqi

Rookie (March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

Leaf Wave - Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

moon so sparkle
hovers over sea
moving through
so clear and blue

underneath calm water
way around to a very bottom
here comes dolphin passing by
oysters never say goodbye

come along
come with me
swim, swim, swim
into a deep blue mystery

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Ramesh T A)

Comments about Leaf Wave by Ahmad Shiddiqi

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (5/31/2009 1:32:00 AM)

    well done! ! God bless your talent. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Barry A. Lanier (5/27/2009 7:53:00 PM)

    reminding me of the deep blue waters of Key Largo here in my country where one finds dophins, conch, and female mystery..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (5/22/2009 4:14:00 AM)

    deep blue mystery that we r all part of...let's swim swim n swim! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (5/21/2009 6:36:00 PM)

    good flow good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 32 Points Fay Slimm (5/21/2009 1:49:00 PM)

    Warm tribute to a very good poet.....10 from Fay (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (5/19/2009 6:13:00 AM)

    Very nice simple words (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 19, 2009

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