A patient to a doctor said so sore
"I can't bear this pain any more
Kill me…I want to die
My lips are going dry"
Said the doc, "For that I am called for"
For that doctor is called for and made for as well.......Valsa......very nicely put to humour
Sometimes pain may be unbearable. But the doctor's duty is to save lives at any cost. The conflicting things are put in nice perspective with great humor. Thank you.
A fantastic write Valsa. He dialled the wrong number, instead he could have called butcher. His all pains would have vanished in one chop.........Sorry for this humorous comment. I really laughed a lot. Ha...Ha..Smiles.....
Well...sometimes, life may turn out to be very bitter that it simply becomes unbearable, but to decide to take your own exit may not be the best. Hope exists where there is life.....but why call the doctor? ......ha! nice poem!
A wonderful limerick dear madam! I profusely admire your work ethics.....10+++++
Lively humour here, but I think Limericks can also be used for more serious expressions stated in tongue-in-cheek style. I have a few of them written, if you feel interested.
My lips are going dry Said the doc, For that I am called for......here is the essence of the poem. A beautiful limerick hauntingly expressed.10
Chapstick can help dry lips any time, was the doctors remedy duck tape? . I got a chuckle out of this one, good doctors are very hard to find, bad patients to easy.
Calling for duty beyond duty of a professional. Thanks for laugh! Nice write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So many news of heartless Doctors... A patient to a doctor said so sore I can't bear this pain any more Kill me…I want to die here the lovable mind of a Poetess , , , , , , , , , [[[[[