A fat man while clambering up a tree
Was stung by a swarm of buzzing bee
Alas! With a heavy thud,
He landed in the mud
The thunderous sound made everyone flee!
Very humorous indeed made more humorous by the size of the man.
Alas with a new heavy thus it expresses reality of climbing up. Very beautifully presented Limerick.
Did they flee in glee? Or did their hearts lose the thud? The limerick is good.
Though this limerick is undoubtedly very humorous, we at the same time can draw an analogy with real life situation if we just imagine ourselves in the boots of the fat man in many a life's daunting situation!
Though this limerick is undoubtedly very humorous, we at the same time can draw an analogy with real life situation if we just imagine ourselves in the boots of the fat man in many a life's daunting situation!
That thud made everyone flee! That the punch. Good limerick.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Humorous yes, but hope when he fell hope the bees had fled too.