Live With An Idea Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Live With An Idea

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Live with an idea
​​​​​​​Sunday,23rd September 2018

No one can say 
who is wrong or right, anyway 
but give no such no label 
it reflects no well

you are right 
only when your conscious doesn't fight 
with the act performed
and right action confirmed 
 
not because your present is bright
so you are right 
you might have accumulated more
and live with comfort here 

the right people always suffer
when they offer
good services
but always shadowed by vice
s
you are right 
when people say to your delight 
your chest may expand 
and it shall inspire you to continue with same trend
 
Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

Live With An Idea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 27 September 2018

Hasmukhlal, such a fine poem of the day............. congrats for being chosen..........10+++++++++++++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2018

welcome tahara khanum 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

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Lantz Pierre 27 September 2018

What a horrible defense of moral equivalency. I can say without any hesitancy that Adolf Hitler and his genocidal holocaust was wrong. Child molesters are wrong. Serial killers are wrong. No matter the belief they hold in the righteousness of their actions. What a bunch of crap.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2018

you are right  when people say to your delight  your chest may expand  and it shall inspire you to continue with same trend   Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2018

a welcome s r lekha 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

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James Mclain 27 September 2019

Great poem, Great poet. Thank you sir: James McLain

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2019

Wrong verses Right! ! Time with the truth; Along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 September 2019

you are right only when your conscious doesn't fight with the act performed and right action confirmed - - soo true dear Hamukh sir. thank u. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 September 2019

It happens always. In the world where crooks have laws in their hands and rule the world it is not a surprise that who obey laws and live honestly have to suffer. A very meaningful poem indeed. Congrats.

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Bharati Nayak 27 September 2019

the right people always suffer when they offer good services but always shadowed by vice - - - - -yes, right people suffer, but they carry on their good services.A lovely poem, thanks for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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