Lonesome Poem by Rambling Dreamer

Lonesome

Rating: 4.3


Once again I'm there, once again I'm in that space.
Once again I'm stranded,
Once again I'm groping in the dark,
And there is just no hint of even a tiny spark.
As I reach out my hand, In search of some warmth, hoping to find a light.
There is no one in sight, I feel like I'm losing this unfair fight.
I can't breathe I can't feel, This space I've been pushed into is airtight.
I'm screaming out loud, I'm screaming with all my might.
I thought the darkness was supposed to numb me, No one around meant peace..
Why is it then my mind is racing....
Why cant I stop pacing?
You have no clue of the pain I am facing.


Once again I'm there, once again I'm in that space.
Once again I'm stranded,
Once again I'm groping in the dark,
And once again you are nowhere in sight..
Once again I'm alone my hand out stretched,
Just hoping you'd notice,
But again, on my brave face and wounded heart there is disappointment etched.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I had written this poem during a very dark n frightening night. i was very low and needed a friend with me. but i was all alone.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aswath Raman 21 August 2013

Please dont be alone. The worst thing you can come up with is to know that you are alone and you will remain so. No, thats not gonna happen to us and that should not either. Welcome to PH, where you can have a family of compassion and love from a bunch of people who just accept the way you are. As the poem is concerned is quite excellent!

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Nikita Das 21 August 2013

thank you :) well noted will try refining :)

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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2013

A warm welcome to PH, this being your first poem here. The poem will look better if trimmed. Need not worry about rhyme, words flow out naturally from your mind. Just a little rearrangement, to give a shape.

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Dave Walker 07 August 2013

A great poem, in the passed I too have been I the dark.

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