Lost Mooring Poem by Chuck Audette

Lost Mooring

Rating: 5.0


I anchored
a windless night
embraced in a dream
struck by moonlight
soft,
slightly abeam
the stars poured in
my heart poured out
my ship of illusion
I'm now without

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Esther Leclerc 13 March 2006

'...the stars poured in/my heart poured out' - really dreamy, that. That's a very nice ship to be on, if only the voyage could last a bit longer. Wonderful poem!

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Barry Van Allen 21 April 2007

Chuck, A little unexpected, but nicely done! You better be careful though, because... that is the kind of thing that will keep you married! :) B.V.A.

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R H 23 April 2006

The imagery here was stunning, the words here struck me - one to add to my favourites. Thanks Chuck! Justine.

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Duncan Wyllie 24 March 2006

A clear understanding of a beautiful night.Amazing words.Love Duncan

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Dan Tharp 15 March 2006

yes... different style, but I like it very much. dan

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Anna Russell 14 March 2006

Wow. The threats were worth it! This is gorgeous Chuck - a different style for you but one you should definitely try more often.10. Hugs Anna xxx

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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