I anchored
a windless night
embraced in a dream
struck by moonlight
soft,
slightly abeam
the stars poured in
my heart poured out
my ship of illusion
I'm now without
Chuck, A little unexpected, but nicely done! You better be careful though, because... that is the kind of thing that will keep you married! :) B.V.A.
The imagery here was stunning, the words here struck me - one to add to my favourites. Thanks Chuck! Justine.
A clear understanding of a beautiful night.Amazing words.Love Duncan
Wow. The threats were worth it! This is gorgeous Chuck - a different style for you but one you should definitely try more often.10. Hugs Anna xxx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'...the stars poured in/my heart poured out' - really dreamy, that. That's a very nice ship to be on, if only the voyage could last a bit longer. Wonderful poem!