Love In A Cave Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Love In A Cave

Rating: 5.0


The object is beyond our reach,
In an ocean of the virtual image,
After a tiring unending voyage,
A kiss to stop your philosophic speech.

I know for sailing you have a ship
Relying on my arms I play with the waves,
Both of us will come back to the caves,
But you, after wasting more time in the trip.

In the heart of a hill on the green shore,
I shall wait for you in a lonely cave,
You'll find me dreaming in a lovely enclave,
For a shipwrecked beloved a place to adore!

Love In A Cave
Tuesday, May 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thanks to Marie Shine for inspiration and the graphics.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 03 June 2019

In the heart of a hill on the green shore, I shall wait for you in a lonely cave....wonderful poetic expression sir! Loved reading this lovely poem....10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 May 2019

A kiss to stop your philosophic speech MS INSPIRES ALL SHE SHINES AND YOU R IN NIAGARA IT SEEMS SHIPWRECKED MAY I BE THERE TO HELP THEE JUST SEN AN SOS PLEASE JA JI

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Marie Shine 29 May 2019

An insightful write sublimely penned with lovely use of various parts of speech. Our lifetime may be long or short but our destiny is fulfilled before we expire and we will be reunited with those whom we love who passed before us. Lovely use of metaphoric detail. I like this poem very much. Tfs, dear Akhtar...

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 May 2019

A lovely philosophic piece so well written as well. I enjoyed reading it.

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SIR SO GREAT OF YOU YOU READ OTHERS TOO HAVE U READ MINE YET PL DO A WONDERFUL ALL SAY POET R U

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No matter how long our journey and no matter how we reach our destination, we shall meet at that place where our faith lies. A poem of.great depth and thought provoking. Wonderfully written. The picture that goes with this poem is amazing.!

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I LEARN FROM SO MANY YOU ARE A POETIC GENIUS HAVE YOU NOT YET READ ME O POETESS

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