Wang Qian

Freshman - 526 Points (1989.1.6 / Xi'an)

Love Is A Train Ticket - Poem by Wang Qian

Love is a thin train ticket
With homesick carriages overloaded
Clattering on the Milky Way
Of the nostalgic calendar
It winds through the sleepless faces
Of the ruby ages
Exaltedly
Speeding to the canvas
With present ink and brushes of past
Unexpectedly
Captured by a moonlike heart.


Comments about Love Is A Train Ticket by Wang Qian

  • (12/3/2015 8:54:00 PM)


    Enjoyed the quiet cadence of your poem's rhythm, it rises and falls with the existence of love. Very good poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Amitava Sur (3/5/2014 8:28:00 AM)


    Nicely expressed the existence of love.....With present ink and brushes of past.

    You may read my poem Song of life
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  • (1/16/2014 7:23:00 PM)


    Love is A Train Ticket is a good poem.

    Satheesh Kumar
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 16, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, January 17, 2014


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