Love Is An Alloy Of Precious Metals Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Love Is An Alloy Of Precious Metals

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I am with you when you are not with me,
I see you when you do not see,
Your eyes are closed but the lips smile,
Reflecting your thoughts that are still juvenile,
So you are travelling to your lovely past,
So you have reverted the time at last,
So you are chasing a naughty boy,
One who snatched your favourite toy?
It's a fairy doll but it's a female,
The boy just sensed that he is a male,
He wants to let you know that you are a gale,
How long you'll remain an ignorant child,
So unaware, so innocent and so much mild,
The doll when moves her lovely eye lids,
Wondering why you remain still among kids,
Now you need a friend, who is a naughty boy,
You are in your teens and need a different toy,
The doll though moves eye lids but do not breathe,
It has no sentiments in its bosom underneath,
Soon the boy will snatch a doll that smiles and cries,
Who swims in passions and in emotions she flies,
Not a doll, in a garden who only loves to walk,
Not an innocent maiden with a childish talk,
In love the boy is determined and confident,
He is capable to steal from a flower its scent,
So you are feeling the lost fragrance of a flower,
How you were wet, when set for a shower,
Look at your teen aged portrait on the shelf,
The boy made you aware of your colourful self,
A beautiful day coming back in your dreams,
So you are swimming in your lost streams,
So you are recollecting the added shine of petals,
Nothing is lost; love is an alloy of precious metals.

Love Is An Alloy Of Precious Metals
Saturday, January 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 January 2019

Reflection of thought through vision of love is amazingly done in this wonderful and excellent poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 January 2019

A beautiful poem that captures the eternality of love and its continuing effects that hold us spellbound. Yes, nothing is lost in the name of love. A marvelous poem so wonderfully written.

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M Asim Nehal 20 January 2019

Another wonderful love poem with some fantastic lines: With every poem you keep amazing..Loved it So you are recollecting the added shine of petals, Nothing is lost; love is an alloy of precious metals.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 January 2019

Now you need a Friend! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khalid Saifullah 21 January 2019

Love is something wonderful and it has so many faces.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 January 2019

oh lovely girl now you are no child a boy is the one who needs to explore thee as much as you wnt one to so do and make you feel more wetter than before now you know why much more those days have gone playing aank micholli he wants now to see what's hidden within your choli and like a rifle he wants to shoot his...inspired by ur snap sir g

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 January 2019

beautiful alloyish poetry sir ji but why have you hop- skip and jumped many of my recent poetry I wonder ji ji ji

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Khairul Ahsan 21 January 2019

Wonderful title, and the last line-'love is an alloy of precious metals'. 'Soon the boy will a doll that smiles and cries, Who swims in passions and in emotions she flies' - Loved these lines.

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