Fay Slimm

Rookie - 20 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Love On The Rocks. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Inward.
The floods of salty stress
whirlpool themselves
into loneliness,

which submerges me.


Outward.
The pantomime carries on
role-modeling you
as a paragon,

which amuses me.


Comments about Love On The Rocks. by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie - 358 Points C. P. Sharma (2/4/2010 7:58:00 AM)

    Submerging in love brings eternal smile.
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  • Rookie Ian Bowen (1/30/2010 3:56:00 AM)

    Fay, well composed piece of work.
    Regards,
    Ian (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, November 12, 2010


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