Fay Slimm

Rookie - 12 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Love on the Rocks.


Inward.
The floods of salty stress
whirlpool themselves
into loneliness,

which submerges me.


Outward.
The pantomime carries on
role-modeling you
as a paragon,

which amuses me.

Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010
Edited: Friday, November 12, 2010

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