Subrat Pradhan


Love, the dive in and out


Falling in love
Is like diving into water
With a splash.

To be in love
Is like to be
In water and inside water
swimming, sporting, playing
Frolicking, floating
With air and without water
To be with the outer world
To be without the outer world.

To be out of love
Is coming out of water
The deeper, one in love
The more time is consumed to come out
The more time is consumed to dry oneself
Getting out of love
Is not coming out to senses
Time has different unseen path
To traverse back
For each lover in love.

Submitted: Saturday, July 21, 2012

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Comments about this poem (Love, the dive in and out by Subrat Pradhan )

  • Rookie - 0 Points Abhinaba Sen (2/21/2013 4:18:00 AM)

    awww...just nice Mr. Subrat Pradhan :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (7/31/2012 5:00:00 AM)

    Falling in love especially love at first sight is like a head long plunge into the deep waters, either you can swim and sport or get drowned! A nice poem on Love! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Supriya Prathapan (7/25/2012 2:46:00 AM)

    The more time is consumed to come out
    The more time is consumed to dry oneself

    Wow! Like your comparison. The magic of 'love' described beautifully.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kendra Tyler (7/23/2012 7:38:00 PM)

    what a beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Robin Bennett (7/23/2012 12:14:00 PM)

    Another beautiful piece! You are going straight to my favorites list! Very talented with you quill and paper. (Report) Reply

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