Treasure Island

Amitava Sur

(20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Love You Dear

She never said, uttered a word
She never did cry.
She only looked at me
With her wide open eyes.

Eagerly when I took her palm
To convey my love and to take in my arm.
It was so chilled like ice -
And she was numb and mum.

I only could read the tragedies in them
In those dry patches of tears, down her cheek,
They spoke about her parting pain-
Till the time they could drip.

Still she left a smile in her lips
As a reminiscent of her love for me,
Kept her fingers still stretched out
To hold me finally with love.

Love you dear, with a love for good
Wherever is your abode.
Amative (25.04.2014) 4-00 pm

Submitted: Friday, April 25, 2014
Edited: Friday, April 25, 2014

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This is a love song for my beloved who left all her love for me before parting.

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  • Roseann Shawiak (4/25/2014 8:59:00 AM)

    Absolutely beautiful, Amitava. Your love for one another goes beyond imagining.
    Such a totally poignant poem, heart-wrenching, but gentle with your love for her.
    I love this one too, Amitava! (Report) Reply

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