Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 21,272 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Love You Dear - Poem by Amitava Sur

She never said, uttered a word.
And she never did cry.
She only looked at me
With her wide open eyes.

Eagerly when I took her palm
To convey my love and to embrace,
It was so chilled like ice -
And she was silent and numb.

I only could read the tragic pains in them
In those dry patches of tears, down her cheeks,
They spoke about her parting pain-
Until time allowed them to drip.

Still she left a smile on her lips
As a reminiscent of her love for me,
Kept her fingers still stretched out
For holding me finally with love.

Love you dear, with an ever lasting love
Wherever your abode is.
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Amitava (25.04.2014) 4-00 pm

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is a love song for my beloved who left all her love for me before parting.

Comments about Love You Dear by Amitava Sur

  • Tanya Gupta (4/25/2014 9:20:00 AM)


    its so beautifull. the love shown is so pure and unique.
    great job.
    thanks! (Report) Reply

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  • Roseann Shawiak (4/25/2014 8:59:00 AM)


    Absolutely beautiful, Amitava. Your love for one another goes beyond imagining.
    Such a totally poignant poem, heart-wrenching, but gentle with your love for her.
    I love this one too, Amitava! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 25, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 17, 2015


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