Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 39,017 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Makeup - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

She has no deficiency in her beauty,
No need of making up anything,
The virgin is free of all ugliness,
She is beauty only beauty,
She is charm only charm,
She is cold in the hot and warming days,
She is warm in the cold shivering wet nights,
She shines like the sun,
She shines like the moon,
And when she smiles,
Stars swim and float in the blue ocean,
Like sexy mermaids,
And the blue umbrella,
Filled in with a wine of delicious love,
How she keeps it intact!
But she sees that love is scare and casual,
And the earth is thirsty of raining love,
Showers of wine then fall on the souls,
And the cold and static,
Is drunk, and active like a handsome youth,
And turned into fire,
And the flames of love,
For the ice to bath,
Then asks the ice to be hot and melt,
And the ice is melted, like the wax,
And water is turned into hot steam,
The heart then opens,
Her kissing eyelids.

She doesn't need a makeup for her at all,
But she makes up us with a lovely call.

(I read a poem by Geetha Jaykumar, therein she wrote that she disliked lipstick. I started writing poem on a woman who dislikes makeup, I don't know how I started describing the virgin of nature. It often happens with me)


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Nature does not need any makeup but provides us it.

Comments about Makeup by Akhtar Jawad

  • Freshman - 824 Points V P Mahur (8/31/2014 5:12:00 AM)

    Dear Bro, A sweet and lovely poem on the beauty of a graceful lady. Thanks for your appreciation. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,791 Points Khalida Bano Ali (8/31/2014 3:42:00 AM)

    Nature is the born beauty and a reflection of His eternal charms. A nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (8/31/2014 2:20:00 AM)

    Praise to be Allah in multitude we find him...nature is a BE to Him nature is so beautiful and we beautify it of course we beguile yet the best creature of Lord Almighty one must love nature to praise Lord thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,810 Points Salini Nair (8/31/2014 1:23:00 AM)

    asks the ice to be hot and melt,
    And the ice is melted, like the wax,
    And water is turned into hot steam....beautiful sir (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,762 Points Md Asadullah (8/31/2014 1:13:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem on Nature, Its our duty to take care of Nature and environment.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 31, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 31, 2014


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