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(Don't rightly remember. They always called me Dogg / The Potato Fields, Indiana)

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Makin' a Sandwich

frowning a frown- i notice
my beer gut-
gotta decide which to do first:
white vinegar smelly onion,
plump pulpy Toe- mater. or
lettuce.
“you’re vine ripened, YO! ”
i grab you and scream:
“Still got yer’ stem,
doncha? ” i squeeze the ball
hard. I see seeds. squirtin
juice.
right then, i put my fist through
the window.

Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, January 17, 2012


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  • Merov Tachgovirian (1/17/2014 6:05:00 PM)

    So violent

    Not one for stems, eh?

    I feel the same

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  • Asif Andalib (11/2/2012 10:12:00 PM)

    I liked it thanks for sharing

  • * Sunprincess * (10/25/2012 1:58:00 AM)

    hahahaha..love this one you are having a sandwich...
    hmm onions, lettuce and vine ripened tomatoe..maybe
    you should add cheese and where is the beef.. haha.. :)

  • Michael Oliver (9/6/2012 5:59:00 PM)

    Love the realism resonate with the randomness of the action- pity its missing the associated expletives as it would be in my case

  • Ellias Anderson (7/28/2012 11:15:00 PM)

    so interesting and funny. i like it.

  • Valerie Dohren (7/23/2012 8:39:00 AM)

    Very entertaining write - can just picture the mess! !

  • Karen Sinclair (7/20/2012 2:35:00 PM)

    I luuurve your style, you are so suggestive in your sandwich write, see in my neck of the woods not sure how far it goes but sandwiches are not always made of slices of bread... great provocative piece...brave

  • Sally Plumb Plumb (6/28/2012 9:25:00 AM)

    Wonderful. I laughed out loud.

  • Captain Cur (5/20/2012 6:59:00 PM)

    You are out there. Funny and crazy. Loved it. What was the name of that sandwich?

  • Heyyou Boy (1/25/2012 10:53:00 PM)

    LOL... Hope you didnt need too many stitches. A great write Scotty

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