Scotty Dogg

Rookie - 78 Points (Don't rightly remember. They always called me Dogg / The Potato Fields, Indiana)

Makin' A Sandwich - Poem by Scotty Dogg

frowning a frown- i notice
my beer gut-
gotta decide which to do first:
white vinegar smelly onion,
plump pulpy Toe- mater. or
lettuce.
“you’re vine ripened, YO! ”
i grab you and scream:
“Still got yer’ stem,
doncha? ” i squeeze the ball
hard. I see seeds. squirtin
juice.
right then, i put my fist through
the window.


Comments about Makin' A Sandwich by Scotty Dogg

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (11/2/2012 10:12:00 PM)

    I liked it thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 16,206 Points * Sunprincess * (10/25/2012 1:58:00 AM)

    hahahaha..love this one you are having a sandwich...
    hmm onions, lettuce and vine ripened tomatoe..maybe
    you should add cheese and where is the beef.. haha.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Michael Oliver (9/6/2012 5:59:00 PM)

    Love the realism resonate with the randomness of the action- pity its missing the associated expletives as it would be in my case (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (7/28/2012 11:15:00 PM)

    so interesting and funny. i like it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,011 Points Valerie Dohren (7/23/2012 8:39:00 AM)

    Very entertaining write - can just picture the mess! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Karen Sinclair (7/20/2012 2:35:00 PM)

    I luuurve your style, you are so suggestive in your sandwich write, see in my neck of the woods not sure how far it goes but sandwiches are not always made of slices of bread... great provocative piece...brave (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,733 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (6/28/2012 9:25:00 AM)

    Wonderful. I laughed out loud. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (5/20/2012 6:59:00 PM)

    You are out there. Funny and crazy. Loved it. What was the name of that sandwich? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 36 Points Heyyou Boy (1/25/2012 10:53:00 PM)

    LOL... Hope you didnt need too many stitches. A great write Scotty (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Brian Purdy (1/23/2012 6:35:00 PM)

    Hilarious, Scotty! Thoroughly enjoyed. Glad I dropt by to peruse. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Michael Oliver (1/22/2012 3:24:00 PM)

    you cook like me more expletives than seasoning or refinement- love this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points C. Cruz (1/18/2012 10:48:00 PM)

    A hairy knuckle sandwich I presume Dr. Watson...? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jonny Brackney (1/18/2012 8:15:00 AM)

    there ain't many left. you're a badass, scotty. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 961 Points Adeline Foster (1/17/2012 11:47:00 AM)

    Was prepared to enjoy this, yo! no! Off the wall puppy! Read mine - The Cat is Free -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 17, 2012


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