Christmas is coming with a rush
Little children just won't hush
Crying, sighing and making a fuss
Waiting for gift, is on what they focus
Making some parents overly weary
Cash shortages causing them to worry
Children are looking for their present
Sadly for some parents all is not pleasant
Too little time and with too little cash
Life's giving most parents a bash
Hoping Santa is on His way
Time is short He mustn't delay
Kids will be crying if He is late
As upon him they rest their fate
Then for love's sake parents must focus
Upon their children gifts for it's a Child
Who makes Christmas so very famous
He is Christ Jesus our only Saviour
Was sent from heaven to earth
Bringing with Him light and life
Redeeming us is a great favour
Let's all sing and be merry
While kids play and be happy
Merry Christmas, every one
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Very nicely written poem, mr. Prince! Thanks for sharing such a masterpiece!
A sweet song in honour of the Saviour that is applicable all year round. Well done my friend,
Christ, Redeeming us is great favour Let's all sing and be happy. Merry Christmas with blessings.
Wonderful words expressed Clarence. Love your notes too as to why this poem is born. Cheers to you.
Full 5 Stars for this sweetly sung Christmas Song poem. I love all kinds of CHRISTMAS poems, and this is so amazingly created with best rhymes and content. The graphic added is brilliant too.I have enjoyed tremendously.
I had to read this, who cares if it is April. Christmas brings out some of our best sentiments and I was right. The thoughts and pictures in my mind's eye made me smile and laugh and then nod slowly.....Christmas in April. I hope you plan on another gift next Christmas. Wonderfully penned and WHAT A GREAT PICTURE too. The full package...10
I'm glad you brought out the real reason we celebrate Christmas. Too many people take CHRIST out of Christmas, and what's left? Only mas, or is it a MESS?
Such a beautiful and honest piece. And very timely too. Have a wonderful Christmas as you celebrate the birth of the King!
focus/fuss.............. :) nice try! I'll buy it; the rhyme, that is. one favorite line: “Life's giving most parents a bash” ……………..maybe. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Hoping Santa is on His way Time is short He mustn't delay ............i usually only capitalize 'his' and 'he' at the start of a sentence and when referring to God (though i no longer adhere to a belief in 'Him, i do continue to capitalize, as i was taught to do many years ago) . Perhaps Clarence is trying to sneak God in here somewhere? ? let me read onward.............. I don’t recall ever thinking of gift-giving to children at X-mas time as a parallel to Jesus and the gifts from the 3 Kings, OR the gift(s) Jesus and His Dad ‘reportedly’ bestowed on Mankind. I think NOW is a great time for Dad and Son to look down upon the Earth again [YES, WE ARE STILL HERE, you Guys! ] and bestow a little more Peace and Good Will Towards “Men” from ALL other “men”. Amen! and, fitting the “season”, I shall place this poem into my/our DECEMBER “a showcase for PH poets”, SECTION B, on my PH site. it is to be found in my list of poems. thanks, Clarence! :) bri
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Who makes Christmas so very famous He is Christ Jesus our only Saviour this is the main substance of the poem. Nicely envisioned. Many thanks.