Allen Steble

Rookie - 110 Points (20/04/1987)

(my Beautiful Flower) - Poem by Allen Steble

You are my flower
you are my sweet soft petal
hand in hand my hand
holding this precious gift
the blossom of your beauty
you are my beautiful flower

You are my flower
you are my sweet soft petal
heart in heart
just one heart
beating to your sweet aroma
the aroma of your splendor
you are my beautiful flower

You are my flower
you are my first blossom
blossoming love
you are my love
you are my first and true
like sunset ocean blue
you are my beautiful flower
i am glad i picked you

Comments about (my Beautiful Flower) by Allen Steble

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/25/2015 3:52:00 AM)

    Beauty with the muse of life! Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/21/2015 12:40:00 AM)

    Hi, well written lovely romantic poem with lots of emotions. I enjoyed reading it and thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (4/6/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    .a lovely romantic piece, full of love and emotions.........
    I invite you to read my poem- - t.never look like one', , , , , , , , , , , plzz comment your views
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  • Amitava Sur (1/12/2014 4:46:00 AM)

    A lovely romanticism in the poem expressing the love & likingness for the sweet heart.... loved it.
    You may read my poem My morning bud of rose
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  • (1/10/2014 11:20:00 PM)

    Beatiful emblem the flower for your love sweet dreams for you both...regards (Report) Reply

  • (10/10/2013 4:26:00 AM)

    Romantic piece of poetry, beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • (10/5/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    Lovely theme Allen. Keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • (8/15/2013 5:04:00 PM)

    Great poem! Please go to my poems and rate and comment on mine! Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • (6/20/2013 3:57:00 PM)

    i love the last two lines
    so beautiful for whom
    she should know.
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2013 4:25:00 PM)

    Well once picked, it's up to us to care for it, a lovely poem on the flower :) (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (6/15/2013 8:03:00 PM)

    Just like flowers love comes in many shape, sizes
    and colors. I am glad I picked you is a very good line.
    Enjoyed it.
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  • (6/12/2013 5:07:00 PM)

    This art illustrates your higher abilities. You struggled in the beginning of this piece but came up sharp at the end A great piece of artistry Go ahead and prove that love (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (5/25/2013 6:52:00 PM)

    how sweet the fragrance of the flower. the first bloom of spring. your last stanza, lovely. (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2013 2:08:00 AM)

    A smooth beautiful poem..... :) ...thx for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (5/22/2013 4:51:00 AM)

    :) i smell the sweet smelling love in this poem.... :) as usual, its very nice :) (Report) Reply

  • Claudia Krizay (5/21/2013 7:02:00 PM)

    This is beautiful- I love the ending- and reading it relaxed me. I loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Philip Emmanuel Penaflor (5/19/2013 2:45:00 AM)

    Simple but beautiful, and the sincere emotion can be felt. (Report) Reply

  • Tribhawan Kaul (5/18/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem indeed. Enjoyed the write. Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • (5/18/2013)

    it's like a song. inspired write (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2013 1:22:00 PM)

    There is a lot of repetition here, which is not a bad thing, as it might suggest unfurling and the pealing back of petals but its a tad too repetitious for me; despite that, there is a lot of honesty in the poem and that is great. i love that. Again its free form, and that makes the rhyming structure hard to comment on, I am not sure that the line the aroma of your sweet splendor works... what do you think? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 6, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 7, 2009

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