Allen Steble

Rookie - 0 Points (20/04/1987)

(My beautiful flower)


You are my flower
you are my sweet soft petal
hand in hand
...in my hand
holding this precious gift
the blossom of your beauty
you are my beautiful flower

You are my flower
you are my sweet soft petal
heart in heart
just one heart
beating to your sweet aroma
the aroma of your splendor
you are my beautiful flower

You are my flower
you are my first blossom
blossoming love
you are my love
you are my first and true
like sunset ocean blue
you are my beautiful flower
i am glad i picked you

Submitted: Tuesday, May 06, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, October 07, 2009

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  • Rookie - 75 Points Yash Shinde (4/6/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    .a lovely romantic piece, full of love and emotions.........
    I invite you to read my poem- - t.never look like one', , , , , , , , , , , plzz comment your views (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,755 Points Amitava Sur (1/12/2014 4:46:00 AM)

    A lovely romanticism in the poem expressing the love & likingness for the sweet heart.... loved it.
    You may read my poem My morning bud of rose (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,282 Points Ken E Hall (1/10/2014 11:20:00 PM)

    Beatiful emblem the flower for your love sweet dreams for you both...regards (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,273 Points Patricia Grantham (6/15/2013 8:03:00 PM)

    Just like flowers love comes in many shape, sizes
    and colors. I am glad I picked you is a very good line.
    Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alexander Coppedge (6/12/2013 5:07:00 PM)

    This art illustrates your higher abilities. You struggled in the beginning of this piece but came up sharp at the end A great piece of artistry Go ahead and prove that love (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew David Dalby (5/17/2013 1:22:00 PM)

    There is a lot of repetition here, which is not a bad thing, as it might suggest unfurling and the pealing back of petals but its a tad too repetitious for me; despite that, there is a lot of honesty in the poem and that is great. i love that. Again its free form, and that makes the rhyming structure hard to comment on, I am not sure that the line the aroma of your sweet splendor works... what do you think? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew David Dalby (5/17/2013 1:22:00 PM)

    There is a lot of repetition here, which is not a bad thing, as it might suggest unfurling and the pealing back of petals but its a tad too repetitious for me; despite that, there is a lot of honesty in the poem and that is great. i love that. Again its free form, and that makes the rhyming structure hard to comment on, I am not sure that the line the aroma of your sweet splendor works... what do you think? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sukkum Chang (5/17/2013 11:58:00 AM)

    its a straight 10 from my side..beautifully expressed poem..keep inspiring us with ur poems.. (Report) Reply

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