My Beloved Poem by Akhtar Jawad

My Beloved

Rating: 4.9


My deaf and dumb and blind beloved,
neither listens to me,
nor speaks to me,
nor looks at me,
my beautiful but unkind beloved
and I still love her so much!
How helpless I am in love!
Her beauty I see scattered everywhere,
here where I am
there where I am not
sometimes too far
sometimes so close
as if she is in my breaths
or in my blood
and I could not touch her,
but I believe as I think
one day I shall force her to open her eyes
she will look at me,
she will smile
and she will tell me in whispers
the long awaited words
"I love you, too.
I am for you
and for me are you
I am the same man in tact
who makes fantasies a fact!
Let the day of love come
my love will enter her heart
she will get all senses from me
and I shall become deaf and dumb and blind.

Tuesday, July 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 May 2018

I am for you and for me are you I am the same man in tact who makes fantasies a fact! Let the day of love come my love will enter her heart she will get all senses from me and I shall become deaf and dumb and blind...WHAT A LOVELY EXCHANGE BLESS YOU

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Nosheen Irfan 05 July 2017

Simply wowwww. Your poetic prowess at its best. Beautifully written. Great flow n rhythm. A huge 10.

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Loke Kok Yee 05 July 2017

Only those who love nature can communicate with her, certainly you do and the result is this beautiful poem! Thank you sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2017

Although beloved one does not able to speak, hear or tell or listens, still she feels love and affection. Nature is real to feel and nature has this power. Sometimes so far and sometimes so close, this nature gives amazing effect on mind. There is love always. Love makes fantastic act. Wonderfully and nicely crafted poem is shared here...10

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