My Companion Poem by Asif Baloch
My Companion
All games has been played
all tears has been shed
all yearns has been cried
all hopes has been lost
Storm that once roared
is silent and torn
tired of trying to
drizzle some dews
on the land barren and dry
All birds are numb
and butterflies are dead
yearn to sing and kiss
is vanished, lost and gone
All flowers has been burned
and rainbows turned to gloom
shadows are my only companion
my lover till I'm doomed
Asif you have painted a bleak picture here and it is very explicit in the way it is portrayed. I thought the shadow at the end really topped the poem off. Well done! Karin Anderson
wonderful write! ! ! ! ! seems like the aftermath of a war, the destruction and pain of lost love, when we are in love everything trivial seems beautiful, but when the lost is lost even the most beautiful things fail to amuse......you have brought out the pain and disappointment in the most touching way......10!
This is amazing! ! Itz perfect...i wouldnt change a thing...and this is true...it happens out there...and you captured the feeling awesomely! ...keep on writing and take care.. Maryam
All flowers has been burned and rainbows turned to gloom the shadows are my only companion my lover till I'm doomed Nothing has burned and no rainbows turned to gloom cos all are but shadows ++++++++10 anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 10:27:44 AM # 1.0.0.1119
We are doomed from the day of eternity.