My Dress For Tonight, , , Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

My Dress For Tonight, , ,

Rating: 3.1


wait my poem and my dress above that tower
you can guess what it will be and what it's color..
this is not the poem.. that is a first step toward the tower
wait my coming poem.................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 15 May 2009

hey i love this wait my coming poem -10 anjali

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 16 May 2009

'wait my poem and my dress above that tower you can guess what it will be and what it's color..' Dress and poem both are beautiful. One is material and the other is immaterial. This poem does sense an aesthetic balance in both. Best Wishes Naseer

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Catrina Heart 18 May 2009

waiting for the poems wearing a dazzling cloth...........

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 May 2009

oh poem is just art of love and color seems to be paints of art, wonderful romance drifting alone from tower above, the luscious glow by dress seduces the reader, well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Saadat Tahir 06 June 2009

sounds like a victorian era fantasy.... with lorn bravados wait...under the tower....while the princess incarcerated above cant decide what to wear very nice ten an cheers

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Ken E Hall 19 March 2010

The tower I know liked plain dark colours like what Anne Boleyn wore, you will have to surprise us or was Snow White in a tower.....no that was the wicked witch! in anticipation, regards

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Emu Getachew 23 October 2009

I am willing to wait and be surprised when you pick your words for a night out in the tower.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 October 2009

Anticlimax wow! Great work to keep readers waiting. Ten this and in advance for next LOL Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to read and comment on my poem: Why Hack My She or other poems. niv

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Readers always wait for the next… Nice concept. Ten. dr. sakti

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Ying Escalona 19 August 2009

and after that..please dropp by...il do the laundry :)

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